Old Orchid

Keep up the good work, author! I have just a small suggestion: try using language to replace long passages of inner feelings and try not to reveal the author's viewpoint. For example, the part where Yuan Lai is thinking at the beginning could be replaced with poetry. This is just my humble opinion. Everything else is great, the plot is very engaging, and I've bookmarked it! I hope you'll visit my book, "A Thousand Years of Dreams."

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(Readers must read what I say! Otherwise, it will be a real shame.) Let's talk about the most authentic things. From the perspective of a ten-year veteran bookworm. I've read up to chapter 25 so far. I couldn't get into the first dozen or so chapters. First of all, I don't really like this kind of Western magic novel. Secondly, it felt a bit bland. Because we were pointing out each other's mistakes in each other's books, we patiently read through them. Then I was very glad that I wasn't so impatient! Around chapter twenty, an idea came to mind. The author's age! If the author is over 40, I would say, "Very good!" If the author is under 40, I am simply amazed! Some of the things that start to appear in it cannot be written simply by flipping through materials or by accumulating knowledge casually over a year or two. It involves a wide range of things! Then, as I read on, a name popped into my head. The Grand Steward! In other words, the one who played the feudal lords with the beacon fire! This is not an exaggeration on my part, but my most genuine and honest thought! This is a profound article! Profound insights expressed in very ordinary language. No foreshadowing has been found yet. But I always feel that the writing style is very similar! Then Then, I read it all over again from the beginning 😂 Many people may dislike the opening, just like me, but please, please persevere! Suddenly I feel that this author has a lot of ambition! This is truly a great book! I hope everyone who reads it will persevere! I haven't read the rest yet. I'll continue if I have any other thoughts after I finish reading it. Regardless of good or bad, I'll only speak the truth! Also, I'd like to ask the author, the outline must be very detailed, right? Finally, I urge the author to persevere and finish writing, regardless of the outcome! I was the first loyal reader. As a bookworm of ten years, I have very discerning tastes. There are no more than twenty books that I can say this about.

Good evening! I'm here to read, just popping in for a chat!

Uncle, I've been following your lead. Although I almost gave up, I pulled through! Not for some lofty ideal, but simply for my own self-discipline!

Keep going, Xiao Hei! Don't give up!!!

I've been experiencing writer's block and have been very busy lately, so I haven't had time to write. However, I will resume updating after the National Day holiday.

Good evening! Supporting your excellent work, it's gaining a lot of popularity! Keep it up!

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