The Vengeful Boy's Defiant Anthem

Leaving aside the first chapter, which can be considered a prologue and foreshadowing, the male protagonist is, needless to say, a young boy—a familiar trope. While others have mentioned issues, I personally think it's acceptable considering the overall length of the novel. The author's writing is very skillful, but the scene descriptions are lacking. Although my writing is terrible, I am still a seasoned bookworm. For example, there's so much more to write about the scene where the thugs are wiped out, but only the word "extremely bloody" was used. You could have described the expressions on the thugs' faces, which would make the protagonist's expression seem natural later on, and the thugs' earlier excitement would have amplified the reader's sense of despair towards them. Then, the protagonist's descent into darkness due to his gangster-like behavior made it difficult for me to connect with the story. You could add some more details. For example, when the Zhao family head says, "How could we have such a useless son-in-law?", Then the description of the protagonist suddenly trembling is a way of describing his laughter. This is followed by Lin Bai's words. That creates the feeling, making the reader unconsciously imagine the protagonist kneeling on the ground, suddenly trembling, and then laughing. If you were to write just one sentence, could you visualize the scene in your mind?

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The opening of the novel is very captivating, cleverly foreshadowing events and creating strong conflicts that keep readers engaged. However, I feel some things are a bit too explicit. As the only prince to escape, the protagonist should be trying to conceal his identity, and it's somewhat illogical that the Jin family guessed it so quickly. Given such a powerful enemy, the protagonist should be more cautious, wary of everyone, and keep certain things from being revealed. Ideally, no one should know his true identity. The opening is somewhat similar to the currently popular novel "Eternal God Emperor," which might be a good reference point. The protagonist in this book seems more like someone burdened with hatred who knows how to hide himself.

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