Douluo: the Phoenix God Descends and the Emperor's Flame Burns the Sky

First of all, some characters are already seriously OOC, right? Then, I want to know why you male fantasy writers always describe the female body? Why don't you write? Don't you know how to write these? And when the female protagonist has already been determined, why must the male protagonist have a lot of romantic encounters? Do all girls in the world have to like the male protagonist? Why do you want to dismantle the cp? Some CPs are fine, why do you have to tear them down? Don't you think it's strange that the character OOC is originally such a person but you wrote him like that?

After reading the synopsis, I thought it was a single female protagonist. All the women with names like to love the protagonist. Then there is Shura Field. I thought it was still watchable but a bit micro-harem, but the description of the characters has a lot of white stockings with a hint of pink, and then there is the jealousy of the protagonist. The key point is how old is the talent? The blushing at the age of six or seven is not the shyness of normal children at all. It is the kind of blushing between men and women. You can understand things about men and women at the age of twelve or thirteen. The reason why modern children mature early is because of the development of the Internet. You can see everything on the Internet. How come Douluo is so precocious? It is really outrageous. After flipping through the catalog, I found that it is completely a harem. If it is a harem, write an introduction to trick the single female lead reader into killing it.

The protagonist's setting is very good, but it's really hard for me to comment on the side harem. Just write the heroine honestly. Anyway, there are some micro harems that I can't stand anymore. I'm not disparaging this book. It's really good, but the various side harems in it imply that I won't comment. Everyone has his or her own preference.

The writing style of this book is quite good, and it can be said to be all sugar without any knives. Although the author said in the introduction that it has a single female protagonist, it actually has three female protagonists. Although almost all women will fall in love with the protagonist, they are not like Zhongma. Moreover, the personality of the protagonist is very successful. The protagonist belongs to a genre that is relatively weak in the early stage but invincible in the later stage. This book will not be misunderstood by those who mind Shrek's torture of three people.

Brothers, to make a long story short, I have read Chapter 300. I have just confirmed my relationship with Ye Lengleng and Duguyan. The biggest measure is a kiss. The plot is good, but I only read fanfics to see the partners. I can't stand it because you haven't done anything in Chapter 300. Generally speaking, if you don't have any requirements for the female protagonist, you can read it. It's pretty good, but it's not to my taste. OK, I'm destined to see you in the next book.

How can I say this? The creativity is great, the fighting scenes are also good, and the emotional scenes are a mess, especially the Shui family. They are all done with sugar. And the damn introduction should be written clearly if you want to write about the harem. The introduction looks like a single heroine, and it feels like there are two or three heroines in the world. Good job, basically all the females are included. It can be said that the entire book is written around women. Let's talk about the character settings. At least 80% of the characters are OOC. The female characters can be accepted by the male protagonist. To be honest, I don't see the use of changing the settings. I just have to fight against the protagonist and then dismantle the cp. It's great. This game is both stand-up and stand-up.

The writing is okay, it's a cool novel, but the description of the emotional line is not delicate enough. If the protagonist wants to have a harem, he must either accept all the people he likes, or not have a harem. This way the writing is a bit uncomfortable.

At first, the protagonist would rather die than vent his evil anger. I thought he had a lot of righteous views. But later on, I realized that he doesn't like ordinary people. Girls with some talents have been married many times, and he would rather die than vent his anger. A pair is good for life. Three Regardless of wives and four concubines, the protagonist is not even as good as Ma Hongjun. Ma Hongjun only loves Bai Chenxiang in the end. The protagonist would rather die than surrender in the front, but in the back he has three wives and four concubines. It's really interesting🤮. To be honest, it's better to let Ma Hongjun be the protagonist.

If you want to have a harem, just do it. It's so painful to watch that so many people love the protagonist, and the protagonist is so gentlemanly. But I haven't collected a few yet. If you want to accept it, just accept it all, it feels very pretentious. The plot is still very interesting, you should be able to change this.

It's okay. The main thing is that I read the comments about the premature maturity. I think this respects the original work. After all, Douluo 1 to 4 are all in this tone. It's really a bit speechless. There can be emotional scenes, but if there are too many harems and the skill of emotional scenes cannot keep up, it will be more troublesome. As for whether it's AI or not, I think it's okay. Regardless of whether it's AI or not, I think it's still quite interesting. I haven't read the rest of it yet, but after reading about a hundred chapters, I think it's okay. I guess it's hard to write about the harem drama later on.