Fantasy: My Empress' Apprentice Is Going to Darken

Nice

The novel is well written. I think the title of the book should be changed to "The Development Plan of a Scumbag". Those who want to become a scumbag can refer to it.

The ending is a bit bad, but good😁

The writing is sometimes good and sometimes bad. After all, it is just a novice who has not grasped the key point at all. The title of the novel is centered around the apprentice, but the actual content lacks the feeling that this is not the case. The apprentice becomes a tool instead of the protagonist. Out of ten, I can only give it a three or four.

The content has nothing to do with the title, but it has completely changed as you write it down. The protagonist has completely become a pure beast, a scumbag and a sentimental man. He can massacre ordinary innocent people just to pretend to be sexy. The protagonist can kill people casually for any trivial matter, and there is absolutely no logic or reason to kill. The writing about various women is also inexplicable. As long as she is a beautiful woman, she will fall in love with the protagonist, no matter how bastard or scumbag he is. I don't see what it is about the male protagonist that these women can fall in love with within three meetings.

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Overall, it's a mess at the end, but the plot and characterization are very good. I'm looking forward to the next one.

It was okay in the early stage, but the excessive feeling in the middle stage was too forced and stiff. In the later stage, it was not so good.

It looks really good. The plot feels like I could write thousands of chapters, but the plot is too tight.

Traveling here, with such a system, it would be better to die