Immortal Burial Monument

Very nice

After reading Chapter 80, I feel that the protagonist is not talented enough. He fights at the same level and fights until he does not know whether he is alive or dead. He is a bit useless.

The written character collapsed. The villains are all united, and the people around the protagonist either have family disharmony or are not taken seriously. As long as they are around the protagonist, no matter which big family they come from, they will be bullied by the smaller families and even their own people. But if the protagonist hits someone else, that person's master will avenge him. Can the routine not be written like this?

When I read Chapter 180, I really couldn't stand it anymore. The main character is so bad. I don't know how to add an invincible stream to the classification? There are so many opportunities and progress is so slow. Every time the protagonist defeats a stronger enemy in a fight, it must be written that the protagonist is also seriously injured or on the verge of being rescued.

💩, I don't know where the roadside can be as good as the protagonist.

It's just a novice. The villain is very brainless. Even if he has cultivated to the saint level, he is still very brainless. Every villain has a brain and tells the truth.

It feels like I have changed three writers before and after, but I am wrong.