Daqian Martial Saint!

I've read more than a hundred chapters, and the plot of the protagonist's training is pretty good! But the writing of the brother-sister relationship is so bad, it's just a vase and oil bottle, with a bunch of words, you just cross it out when you see it! It's not good to have more words and longer articles. Most of the readers are driven away by the writing.

No wonder Gou Dao novels are not popular. I only know how to write them. They are submissive and have no spirituality at all. In what era are you writing Gou Dao novels and come up with some new ideas? You have to fight for everything without exposing anything. The left and right brains interact with each other. In this cannibalistic background, it is garish and ugly.

There is definitely a lot of water. The author must be from the Political Research Office. The analysis reports one after another are so numb! The attributes of a scumbag have been laid out, so just practice hard and don't think about it.

The first part seemed pretty good to me, but the later stages were too detailed and difficult to read. You either have to reach the final stage of the Grand Master, perfection, etc., And you have to reach some kind of pinnacle, peak, or extreme. After reading too much, I felt irritated, as if I was deliberately stuck in the realm. This is a common problem in this kind of novel. Anyway, I just skipped to the second part.

Overall, it's pretty good. It's just that the promotions and realms written in the early stage are a bit too fast. The promotions in 1-2 years are too fast. Just keep the chapters and write the timeline a few years longer. I haven't been able to understand the exercises in the later stages. The overall framework is quite good, and there are many small holes to read. It's hard to find books that I can read now. I want to give it an average, but let's forget it and give it a good review.

Me: I'm going out to buy breakfast. Author: When I woke up, I felt hungry, probably because I was hungry. The sun outside was shining warmly, reflecting on the window sill. The shadows of the leaves were flickering, and the sound of the TV made people irritated. Yesterday, my father repaired the TV that had been used for many years. The sound was louder and the picture was clearer, but it just sounded more annoying. The neighbors probably felt the same way. I heard that my neighbor, Uncle Wang, unfortunately broke his leg yesterday when he went out to buy groceries. He is still lying in bed in the hospital. His son is out of town and has not been able to come back. His daughter is in the local area, but she is busy at work and can't take care of it. Only Aunt Wang is busy and has to go home to cook and take it to the hospital. She is really busy, and I don't blame the children. She can't be delayed in work. I just feel sorry for Aunt Wang. The spicy soup on the street next door has too little thickening, too clear, too few meatballs, and the deep-fried dough sticks are not bad. You can go to his store to buy some fried dough sticks... As for what to drink, the soy milk with added sugar makes you fat, and the soy milk without sugar is a bit astringent, which is really hard to swallow. Moreover, their soy milk is mixed with too much water and does not taste good. The store opposite sells xiaolongbao. The soy milk is delicious and they also sell red dates. For my taste, I should buy a cup. I'm afraid I won't be able to eat the Xiao Long Bao anymore. Do you want to buy some tea eggs? I don't seem to have enough money in my pocket. I should save up for a few days before buying it to supplement my protein... Anyway, I don't have to think about it so much. It's time to go out and buy breakfast.

There's a lot of words in the bar, it's too watery

The front is okay, but the back is not that good. Do you think this is a cool novel? It also hides this and that. Do you think it's a bad novel? But it's just this and that, and it's not afraid to kill one or the other. There's no intention of hiding it at all. I don't know how other people feel. I've seen almost half of it now, and that's the feeling.

He is very weak on a daily basis, and he is not very good at hanging. When will this kind of speed reach the Martial Saint?

That's too long-winded! Most of the text describes the inner thoughts of the protagonist