Very Hunter

Books are good books, don't turn pig's trotters into horses. Eight out of ten books read, pig's feet are all stallions🐴. Two or three are still acceptable. I fall in love with one and fall in love with the other. I think I am also a normal man, but I really can't accept that. Are there really so many dirty people? Or am I too young!

I wonder if the author had a good idea of ​​the plot when writing this novel? I didn't read much, maybe two or three hundred chapters, and saw the male protagonist forming a mercenary group with a group of low-level mercenaries for the sake of spiritual practice! ! ! Is that wrong? First of all, you are a being who can fight various high-level demon dragons alone, but you still need to form a team with low-level ones? You are so good at fighting dragons and devils, and you can level up without upgrading by fighting a few mercenaries? Well, even if you insist that you have to do it in the low-level to upgrade, then you still use high-level equipment to fight monsters in the low-level? If you can level up like this, those high-level monsters that you smashed will be really pitiful! I understand that the author wants to upgrade the male protagonist while pretending, but it would be too much to keep pretending! Although the novel is a fantasy world, if the author wants to write a running novel like other authors, then I mind not writing so many words! Anyway, I just pretended to just write an outline and make up a little story. It doesn't matter if there are any pitfalls. I just pretended to be brainless throughout the whole process. Then the male protagonist had a group of wives and concubines who loved him to death. The enemies were casually and brainlessly dealt with, and 1.8 Million words was enough! You are tired from writing so much! We looked not only tired but also sick

Your math was taught by your physical education teacher, right? There are 600 captains for 60,000 people and one captain for one thousand people?

How should I put it, it always feels very confusing. I didn't feel the protagonist's yearning for equality at all. Maybe there was, but it should be very small. At least let me reveal it in the last line of the article. Yearn for world peace, or the protagonist will lead the continent and use his little knowledge to make money with his brains, instead of just getting money by robbing and hunting World of Warcraft. Moreover, the author's setting in this book is very strange and does not match the rest of the story at all. The first part is Western, and the second part turns directly into Eastern fantasy. In terms of behavioral patterns, the protagonist's setting is very much like a licking dog. In the early stage, he is unwilling to face the women around him who are secretly interested in him. It's a bit like Tangshan in "Douluo Dalu". It would be better to refuse earlier, but not telling them feels like scum, and maintaining a vague sense of distance, a bit like playing hard to get. I watched the protagonist compete with big guys from all walks of life for a long time. At least there is some way to improve his luck. It always feels like the protagonist is like a tool that was cultivated as a container to seize the body. The setting is Western, but the frame structure is like an Eastern fantasy, making it completely different. (If you don't like it, please don't comment. If you have anything to add, please leave it in the comments section. Thank you!)

I have read more than a hundred chapters, and the writing is okay. The plot is a bit messy, but I can still understand it. I would like to add some comments by the way.

The world environment in the previous chapter is very large, but the author seems to be a little unable to grasp the mismatch between the plot and the general environment, and hastily finished it. Knowing the preciousness of the perfect potion and giving it to a bad stranger, what made me give up on this book the most was the author's positioning of the heroine. You can either go straight to sex, or just be honest. Don't say that you don't know how to deal with the relationship between two girls, while at the same time touching the two girls.

Although Pigfoot is only a junior high school student, Haonao has the experience of a 30-year-old, so why is he living like an idiot all this time! Don't you know how to learn more?

The author's math and physical education teacher taught me that 20 cubic meters can be up to 5 meters long, 4 wide and 1 meter high. In the end, your length and width are 20 meters? ? ? The minimum is more than 400 cubic meters. If the length, width and height are 20 meters, it is 8,000 cubic meters... Can I take a snack?…

It's too confusing and wordy. The key point is, can you imagine clicking into the interface of a Western fantasy novel with great interest and finally seeing an Eastern cultivator? Are you afraid that you are not here to disgust people?

There is serious discrepancy between the directory and the content