The Ultimate Ring

The front of the book is quite nice. The game and the real world are intertwined very harmoniously. However, it is too slow to defeat monsters and level up. I kept talking about leveling up, but it turned out that after 600 chapters, I have only reached more than ten levels. How do you write the rest of the book? After writing about the city, write about the world of cultivation, then the world of immortality, and then the world of gods? But this is not a fault. The main reason is that readers (such as me) are not happy with it, but I still like this book very much. Now let's talk about what I dislike about this book. It's normal for the author to want to depict a plot of pretending to be a slap in the face, but can you not make all the villains look the same? For example, Li Bing saw the naughty side of the protagonist giving Xuan-level skills at the birthday party. Everyone knows that the protagonist is not easy to mess with. He is a second-generation rich man with no cultivator backing in his family. Why can he still do it and dare to hate the protagonist? And that Jiang Yu? Do you think he looks like Li Bing? The sects behind his family all give face to the protagonist, but he, a member of a vassal family, wants to kill the protagonist all the time? What is he doing? Doesn't it mean that cultivators are transcendent? Is your description of the villain too scumbag? I feel like vomiting just looking at Zhao Xueyi. Zhao Xueyi was described like that during the classmate dinner scene. Later, you also wrote about the protagonist's ambiguity with her? Does it mean that a woman has to have an affair with the protagonist? Now, Wang Wenting has been written about again. Are you, the author, deliberately trying to mistreat our readers? Xu Ziqi's episode is directly a failure among his failures. The protagonist's good-guy mode is in full swing, and her IQ plummets. This episode is really nauseating to watch. Xu Ziqi's image is that of a tool, and Sister Zhao suppresses her to death. When God met Xu Ziqi for the first time, the protagonist thought she was an Internet celebrity? God is betting on a 2-year, 5 million contract? God, sister Zhao said in the first few chapters that she wanted Xu Ziqi to meet important people, but then she just made the protagonist angry with an incomprehensible operation? Jiang Yu's father scolded his son like that, but this Sister Zhao still keeps looking towards Jiang Yu. With such a strange brain circuit, is she really good enough to be a villain? And after the protagonist ran away in anger, Jiang Yu came over to take over and drug Xu Ziqi? It's really done in one go. I don't object to the protagonist being a bad guy, but he really can't be strong-willed towards women. As long as a woman is able to eat the protagonist to death, I really admire it. The ones who were having an affair all the time looked pretty good. I was expecting the heroine to emerge from them, but now all kinds of monsters and monsters are popping up, so can't the protagonist be tougher? If you should let go, if you should chase, if you really can't let go, you can still write a touching and touching plot, which is better than Zhao Xueyi, Wang Wenting and the like. Do you want a hodgepodge? One pot? The protagonist is not angry at all when a woman takes advantage of him? I don't know what everyone thinks, but I'm very disgusted. The author does not describe Liu Yan'er's feelings for the protagonist, but instead adds other women. Is it a bit of putting the cart before the horse? Personally, I think more can be written about the emotional experiences of Liu Yan'er and Tang Yufei. The first part is not finished yet, so I am writing the second part. I'm afraid that by the end you won't know what you are writing. Although he said so many bad things, it was only Xu Ziqi's part. He looked pretty good before. The game world part is really well written, but the reality part is a bit unsatisfactory. It's cool to pretend to be cool, but please don't set the villains to look like SB. Can't we write smart villains? Isn't it good to have a deep-city villain? Again, isn't it possible to have a self-aware villain? Do you have to fit in the same mold? That's all I want to say for the time being, and it may contain strong subjective assumptions, so I hope you don't mind.

In my mind, the content of this book so far can be regarded as a middle-to-upper-class novel. The plot development is progressing steadily, and the content of future chapters is promising. The development of the protagonist in the real world has just started, and there is a lot of content to be discovered in the game. The interesting points are basically the same old routines but not obtrusive or clichéd. The male protagonist's personality and acting style are likeable, and the proportion of reality and game content is appropriate. But I think there is still room for improvement. Speaking from a personal point of view, the first is the conflict between the male protagonist and Manager Huang of Cailemen. Personally, I feel that this plot is a bit delayed and not handled perfectly. However, of course, the boss behind the scenes is finally introduced. I think it is a reasonable story arrangement. In addition, this also involves the unsafe handling of ingredients, herbs, etc. That the male protagonist brings from the game world. Although there is a foreshadowing of the good brother Hou Xiaoguang (the identity of the master of a sect of the male protagonist Bai De can also be a reasonable explanation for the source of the herbs), we still hope to find a reasonable source process as soon as possible, otherwise it will always feel like a time bomb. Then there is one thing that I find scary, which is the interaction between the male protagonist teleporting between the game world and reality. The main reason is that when the male protagonist teleports, he disappears and the time in the other world is still passing. The game world also has time limits. Although the male protagonist has narrowly avoided the risk several times, I think something big may happen in the future. I hope the male protagonist can find a way to avoid such things as soon as possible. Otherwise, every time he narrowly avoids it, it will be more or less unrealistic, and it will make people around him suspicious, and readers will feel irritated after reading it. Secondly, the relationship between the male protagonist and the female character is a bit ambiguous. I'm not sure whether the author plans to open a harem (it's hard to say in reality, but at least there are no scruples in the game), so I just mentioned my own thoughts. First of all, I like Liu Yan'er and Tang Yufei the most in the real world. They also have a very high affection for the male protagonist. I think it would be difficult for the male protagonist to choose between them. I think they are both arrogant and arrogant in starting a harem. It is unrealistic. It can only depend on the author's performance; I personally like the male protagonist more The lower ones are the person the male protagonist had a crush on in college (I forgot her last name, I just remember her name was Xueyi) and Ye Feifei. First of all, I think the male protagonist shouldn't be so moved when faced with Xueyi's temptation. Because Xueyi is too utilitarian and her previous attitude, I don't think the male protagonist will be very fond of her. In addition, there are so many women around the male protagonist who are more beautiful than Xueyi and who really like the male protagonist. There is no need for the male protagonist to be fascinated by her just because of a little temptation. What's more, Tang Yufei is so proactive and hot without seeing any reaction from the male protagonist. Therefore, I feel that the handling here is not appropriate; as for Ye Feifei, I think it is too funny. It's not much, but I don't like her attitude very much (of course it has something to do with her background, but this only means that I understand the origin of her attitude and don't necessarily like her). In addition, I was misunderstood by Ye's father and Ye's mother before. I always feel that it is better for the male protagonist not to get involved in this muddy water. I hope there will be a reasonable ending later. As for the game world, I think the Seventh Princess can definitely be developed. The female assassin is also a target. Luo Yue is a person who is completely loyal to the male protagonist and will not resist any orders from the male protagonist (maybe she will be happy if the male protagonist does whatever he wants). Generally speaking, there is no clear female protagonist yet, but with so many beauties surrounding the male protagonist, there must be some signs of it. It has been over 500 chapters, so I hope the author can give me some hints. Okay, I understand that the author must have his own ideas and outlines, and various foreshadowings are slowly unfolding. The above are just my sincere thoughts as a reader (I think it is enough for a refreshing article to implement the "cool" point, and of course rationality is also very important). I hope the author will update more and the subsequent chapters will be more exciting~

1. Wu Fan is not very realistic and his character is a bit vague. 2. Wu Fan is too indecisive. He who leads the troops must not kill him when it is time to kill him. Chen Yufei is already showing signs of rebellion and should be killed immediately. This is the reason why you will not accept your orders. 3. In modern times, Wu Fan loves to show off too much and has to do anything. As a result, the more he does, the more chaotic he becomes. Still being hunted. Bad review

The protagonist is not only a virgin, but also a middle schooler. She also likes to be a dog licker. She can sell millions of rosewood, but she sells it to a female boss whom she has only met once or twice. As a result, she can't get the millions in cash and has to wait for two months to pay. There is obviously a boss next to her who offers more money, but she still insists on choosing the female boss. There are three female protagonists in just a few dozen chapters. I want to ask the author, do you want the protagonist to start a harem? It's still dog licking. The licking is so fresh and refined. I originally skipped chapters if I didn't want to read them, but then there were brainless articles that made me vomit blood. I gave up. Mad garbage articles.

I feel that this is the most attractive book for me. Wu Fan travels back and forth between reality and the ring plane, giving him two different feelings. Moreover, there is no polygamy like other books. Wu Fan's three views are also relatively correct. It is a rare good book. Come on, author! Aoli gives!

That mount token is really cruel. It can transform into an armored car or a sports car. Why is it not safe and fast to spawn monsters like a fighter jet? If you almost change into a flying one, it's not very fast. Flying can also be considered a mount. And the main character is so rich and a teacher. After being teased and threatened by college students, there is no way. I can only give in. I don't have a clear favorite. I don't have anyone I want to chase. It's a requirement. I obviously thought Liu Yan'er was beautiful at the beginning. Later, there were cheats and I didn't chase her. Yoo Yeon-ah seems to like the protagonist for no reason at first, but she doesn't like anyone. Just because she feels like her elders can see through her at a glance? Then there are several top beauties who have a complicated relationship with the protagonist. Then the protagonist opens restaurants and has tens of millions of spare money to rent a house. It is obviously more convenient for him to travel through time by buying a house by himself. When he started selling wood, he was obviously short of money, but he still had to let Zhao Yanan owe it. Are these two the only ones in the wood market? Wouldn't those rich men who pursue Zhao Yanan lend a helping hand when she is in trouble? Kusunoki, who was attracted by the male protagonist for less than 10 million, took the first step. The most beautiful woman who has a relationship with the male protagonist, or is ignored by many people. Are those young men really that bad? How come Wang Ziming, who has a good relationship with the protagonist, never has a very good girlfriend, and is not attracted by the most beautiful woman? These top beauties are all single and have a complicated relationship with the protagonist. I really feel sorry for the male character who appears in the novel. The protagonist shows the world that he keeps the habit of morning jogging. I won't talk about it. What the hell is going to the gym to exercise? You will be transformed once you upgrade. With equipment and so many attributes added, is there any effect of exercise? What is the protagonist's ultimate goal as a down payment for the world he lives in? I still think about opening restaurants all over the world. It is so difficult to make money in the game world. Why doesn't the protagonist think about doing business? Is it faster to grow it yourself? So many people can't eat. It's obvious that food is in short supply. Why didn't this big market be discovered? With so many resources, bring a silver weapon. What kind of bow is it? The promised intelligence attribute has been improved. Everything is easy to remember. It is also full of problems. How come it is not used by the NPCs in Novice Village? Then it is so difficult to level up at the beginning. How many levels does it take to reach the full level and become a god? A not-so-important member of the Kong family pursues Liu Yan'er so arrogantly. What are the direct descendants of the Kong family busy with? I feel like I don't want to watch it.

You are awesome. You update one chapter a day. I can't stand you. You are so awesome.

I feel that the author must be young and a bit like a high school student. The subject matter is actually very novel and talks about real reality and things in another world. The key is that the more you look at the back, the more boring it becomes. The halo of the protagonist is simply too heavy. If you would rather be in a world where you have to recruit soldiers, it is still okay. The key is that you have to be rich. I feel that the author can have everything the protagonist wants, but it is not very realistic! At least be somewhat coherent! When I saw the back part, I felt like I couldn't stand it anymore.

This book cleverly combines the real world and the game world. There is a degree of transition between the two. At the same time, the plot is smoothly linked with ups and downs, which arouses the readers' heartstrings. It can also promote good qualities and sentiments through the main characters of the novel. It is a good novel to read. (At the same time, I hope the author will continue his efforts and speed up the update)

If you want to break up with Zhao Xueyi, then break it off. Could it be simpler? ? It's so disgusting to be so disconnected. There is also Tang Yufei. The male protagonist has always been wary of her, and she was threatened because some students and teachers went shopping. If you want to accompany a beautiful woman, just accompany a beautiful woman, okay? Make these excuses. It looks real. As expected, I still like the rebirth stream. He is cold-blooded and calm, unlike this kind of virgin, who is too timid to hold a woman's hand.