Mortal Ascension Record

It was well written at the beginning, but it slowly became wordy.

Not bad

Neither looks good. That's too much. It is said that ordinary people are cultivating immortals. The result was anything but mortal. Along the way, the whole world is following his direction. Isn't this the second generation's path to immortality?

A common problem in fairy tales is that after a good beginning, the end of this book comes a bit early!

The protagonist is by no means weak, but every time he is forced to create enemies with different levels and different levels to fight, he is the same and has no new ideas. He is not as good as useless.

Too wordy.

The writing is too verbose! ! ! !

I'm just trying to make up the word count, and I feel like vomiting.

The review is not good. From the shadow at the beginning to the ending... I was drunk.

What a sloppy ending