Cultivation of Immortality Begins in the Desert

This article generally has no major logical loopholes. The writing is on the right side. Although it lacks some skills, the direct narrative is still quite smooth. There are some problems with the big map in the middle, but it is still exciting before and after. The score is obviously low.

The protagonist knows that he is the protagonist of destiny, and always does things out of his mind. For example, when he went on a treasure hunt with Chen Pingli for the first time, he encountered four sand bandits, two against four. He was already at a disadvantage, and the opponent's level was still high. The protagonist just did not work hard, which made Chen more stressed. In the end, Chen died. The protagonist used blood escape to escape. After returning, he was questioned by the ancestor of the Chen family. He still felt that he was worthy of the opponent. There are more mindless content later, which I can't take stock of.

Overall, the plot in the first half is fuller and more compact, while the second half is more sloppy, but this is okay, it doesn't matter, and it doesn't affect the viewing experience. The most disgusting thing is the character problem of the male protagonist. Every time he meets someone who is a few levels older than himself, he still gets very aggressive towards them, is still not afraid of being slapped to death, and then behaves with double standards when he does things.

It feels like a nonsense article written by a strong-mouthed person, like an antique plot from decades ago, where a person who traveled through time has nothing but his words to become a strong person.

It's very common, always seeking death, fearing death and avoiding evil should be everyone's choice.

It's well written, but it lacks a sense of control.