Fellow Taoist, Your Script Is so Beautiful

I'm writing a book review again, how should I put it, because I got a lot of resurrection coins after reading it. Both stories have their own merits. Jiang Lin is the villain, but the justice in his heart is unrivaled in the past two lives. He is destined to be extraordinary. No matter Jiang Feng or Jiang Shi, he is still him, a man with explosive personality and charm. Although she is often pushed forward, without knowing it, she still has some forced affection. (This is also considered a feature of this article, but it is not a stallion, but it is still good-looking) Because of the villain system and resurrection coins, he can be magnanimous, flamboyant, unrestrained, and indulgent. He is not sentimental and wants to be good to every girl he likes. He is both romantic and invincible. Somehow, I just like his tone. But Su Li really feels like a dragon and a snake. Jiang Lin is a real dragon, but Su Li is a grass snake. Su Li is not invincible, he is still weak and dare not love or hate, even if there is a system. Maybe it's a feature of the book. The script seems to have poor functionality, and it can't compare to the villain system. The promotion is lagging. Look at Jiang Lin, and then look at him. The realms all exceed several major realms. The two books are the same, but this waste material flow is really incomprehensible. Both have masters, one who can be seen every day, and one who has not heard of it for ten years, the ancient sword god and the strongest person in ancient times. I'm sorry, I can only choose the former. Because the script is really crappy. The timing is not working properly and it is so random, 666! He has the heart of three palaces and six courtyards, but he refuses one by one. Look at Jiang Lin, and then look at Su Li. (Only personal opinion, feel free to comment if you don't like it)

After reading more than 200 chapters, the author's ability to make jokes is worthy of recognition, but apart from the jokes, the rest is pulp - the emotional scenes are inexplicable, except for the junior sister who is more reasonable, the other female characters are all magical love at first sight, and there is no reasonable process at all; there are too few battle scenes to comment on; the settings are confusing, and the later settings are inconsistent with the previous ones; the plot logic is also confusing, and it seems that the protagonist is a ZZ. For example, around chapter 200, the protagonist and others His friendly sect prepared to participate in the trial, but the protagonist met the enemy (the Kingdom of Ten Thousand Demons, whose strength crushed everyone who came out for the trial), and was beaten by the opponent. He thought that the protagonist should quickly notify other sects that the situation had changed, or find a way to inform the senior sect of himself to prevent the enemy from being unhappy and destroying his side. However, the protagonist continued to flirt with other female protagonists like nothing was wrong. This inexplicable plot directly gave up the idea of ​​watching...

First, I won't comment on the writing, I will only discuss the plot and emotional relationships. First of all, the emotional part of this book is really messed up. Let's not talk about the fact that the woman falls in love with the male protagonist for no reason, and the harem is close to the male protagonist, but the male protagonist still doesn't understand why. Is there a flaw in the male protagonist's brain? Then there is the classic review of why I like the male protagonist. This kind of b-plot is really mind-blowing. Then there is the main line, where contradictions often appear. I just think it's a bit awkward when it comes to embodying the male protagonist's wisdom. I didn't see anything outstanding about this book. It was too frivolous and uncomfortable to read. It failed to reflect the importance of the script when I read it, and it often acted like a bad good guy. The master's portrayal was also inexplicable. Every time, the male lead only came after he was dead. He acted cute every time he appeared, but he still couldn't sell it well. Then the script is written to be arbitrary and eternal? There is no foreshadowing in the plot, and the look and feel is just like writing whatever comes to mind, and I especially like to have a low number of words in the narrative section at the end of the chapter. Please, everyone is reading novels, not your life stories.

A classic Japanese male protagonist who is gentle with women and only flirts with them but never marries them. If you're writing a pure love story, don't write about a lot of women, and if you're writing about a stallion, don't write about loving only one person. All I can say is that it is a novel written by a dead nerd. It is really rubbish.

There are really many heroines

The first two or three hundred chapters are quite good, but the further you read, the worse it gets. I tried to endure it and ended up tasting the strawberry flavor😓. I suggest you read the first part rather than the second part. The second part is getting more and more addictive. Is the male protagonist still weak? He is a thousand-year-old eunuch.

I can only say that it's okay. The biggest problem is that the male protagonist is like a eunuch, just like a man, but not green.

It's too witty at the end, the protagonist is just a zz, don't read the script unless something big happens, and there are hooks equals no hooks, so it's better not to watch it. It looks like chewing wax from the back, really boring

The male protagonist thinks about only looking for Junior Sister Qu every day, but when he meets a good-looking woman, he will be all kinds of Asasi, and then the women also like the male protagonist, but the male protagonist is an incompetent star, he will not refuse or take the initiative, and I don't know if he is pretending to be unaware of the female protagonist's feelings. Then the male protagonist holds the system but is suppressed in various ways every day and cannot resist.

The male protagonist has no sense of danger at all. He is about to die. He jumps into the trap stupidly, as if his life will be lost if he uses his golden finger. Moreover, when he sees a woman, he treats her like a dog. It's disgusting to watch.