The First Immortal of Destiny

The writing was okay, but the character of the protagonist was not well established. Strangers will return the favor if they help. Qingmei has helped her uncle since she was a child, but Qingmei has never thought of repaying him. After all, she is still in the same sect and has never even visited him. It's not like he can't get anything out, just practicing a few elixirs is enough for his uncle to use.

I gave up the book when I saw the first weak premise, and it was very obvious that the author had no ability to write a book at all. As a competition for a sect to select outstanding disciples, external forces such as talismans can be used. What else is there to compare with? Just compare with more money. I can't even imagine what other books you might have written.

It doesn't feel engaging, it's just the kind of article that can be skipped and read. The personalities of the characters are also mediocre, with no outstanding points and not distinctive enough.

The protagonist of this novel has a bit of a strange habit, preferring to have sex and give away his daughter. I feel a bit disgusting, so I stopped reading it.

This is the first time I read a fantasy novel. The cultivation resources are heavily invested in auxiliary types, but the actual level of strength is invested very little. Don't practice! And the system is a bit weird, random critical hit rate ➕ destiny, there are no rules, such as what must be achieved to achieve it! And based on the proficiency of the pig's feet, it may not necessarily make money to make alchemy and draw talismans by cheating, so no matter what, other people are still losing money to practice alchemy and draw talismans! Everything written is weird and illogical! It's really not as good as most fantasy novels

This book is for primary school students! Abandon books

It starts out attractively, but then it becomes an old routine and the writing is not very good.

I can only pull the water character on the panel

Indecisive

The beginning is okay, but I can't watch the rest of it without skipping a beat. It's been useless since Miss Zhao appeared. I can't watch it no matter how much I skip.