Gua Tianmen

It would be better if there were more explanations at the end. Many people's endings are unexplained and end in an anticlimactic ending!

It would be nice if the heroine didn't like to cause trouble so much.

The heroine, Xiao Baihua, doesn't know anything and can only act, which makes her feel a little disgusting.

The story is exciting, but there are too few daily routines, and the whole story feels a bit tense.

It's just that the ending is so hasty

Very nice. This author's works are great.

It's so beautiful and the ending is great too

Great, I love the ending. A book worth reading📖

The plot is okay, and the heroine's character makes people have no desire to watch it. In the early stage, the heroine was a powerless seductress. No one believed in the hero but the hero, and she always had to save her. The existence of the heroine was more like a fantasy-themed spoiled wife novel. In the later period, I didn't feel that I had made much progress when I became a Saint of the Fox Clan. There are a lot of words to transition these three years. For example, the Jiang Dragon King completely broke the seal and appeared in his true form. His cousin became the Gu King and his strength increased greatly. As a result, I skipped the entire article as soon as I wrote about the emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists, because it was really annoying and unsatisfying. The female protagonist was holding back in the early stages, and the male and female protagonists were each holding back 50% in the later stages. The CP of the supporting characters is also inexplicable. I won't talk about my cousin and sister-in-law. After all, there is nothing written about it, but I fell in love suddenly. My cousin fell in love with the heroine out of nowhere, and falling in love with Fu was also very sudden. The CP lines between Liu Changfeng and Feng Ling are even more speechless. Liu Rumei appears near the end. It seems that the author wanted to change the CP but the response was not good so he wrote it back. Feng Ling was originally set to have an outstanding appearance. After all, she transformed into a human form as soon as she broke out of her shell. In the middle He also gave the heroine a very powerful help during the fight. In the first battle after Nirvana, he was also full of fighting power. The result was the same as that of the female competitive sister-in-law. She died for love and had to say "I am the woman who can really help you." What do you want to do? May I ask? Then it highlighted that the best love is letting go and wrote about Liu Rumei. Finally, Feng Ling turned into an egg and was resurrected. It was really Jin Jin's fault. What he wrote to Liu Changfeng was like a scumbag who took advantage of sex, making everyone feel like they were part of their play. The plot is okay, and the story line is okay, but the heroine's character and the characters in the later stages are really chaotic.

A bit unfinished