Funeral in Kowloon

The protagonist looks useless, there are many typos, and the content is confusing.

Good looking

There are just too many typos. The rest of the writing is very good. I hope to improve the typos.

It's too inked, there's not much explanation, and when I look at it, I just don't have enough words to scold it.

Can you write down some of the later beauties?

There's so much talk, and it's so verbose

The plot is great, layer by layer, and the writing is very good. Except for the ending, which is a little rushed, everything else is very good. Two more extra episodes would be even better.

I worked all day and night... Just wrote this thing in the ending? Grass

As I watched it, I felt like I was among them. It was so fascinating that I couldn't resist it.

The endings of the next dozen chapters are a bit too hasty, especially the last one. The rest of the chapters are just fine.