Diary of Mourning

It's very interesting and thrilling. Is there a second part?

Don't you know that you are a funeral director? Why don't you always write the main plot? You only write about how to help one and the other to help that one. Aren't you a pure holy mother?

Nice

I felt good in the early stage, the plot is compact, and it makes people feel that righteousness often produces dog-slaughterers. Later, it became more and more like saints, mothers-in-law, and it was disgusting.

The plot of the article is so tight that I don't know until the end😝 I should be able to continue writing. After all, Yi Xin still has room for growth. In addition, whether their relationship between hoeing at noon will continue, what kind of apprentice they have, and whether there will be any emotional drama with Zhou Qing. . . .

It's nice to read, but the author made a lot of typos.

The protagonist is so holy, he should be allowed to sit on the Leshan Giant Buddha

The first part is pretty good, but how come it ends like this? I really didn't expect it. I thought it would end badly, but I didn't expect it to be so bad. It ended hastily before it was finished. The relationship between the protagonists Zhao Yixin, Zhou Qing, and Chu He is optional, but you should at least finish the main plot. Author, you have to fill the hole you dug yourself. Yan Shan's grandfather in South Asia doesn't want it anymore, right? I've never read a novel with such a bad ending.

It's so beautiful. It's actually not fancy. Every story is novel. When will there be a new one?

Brother, can you please write less plot in the next dungeon?