Prehistoric: a Man Was Writing a Diary in Jiejiao, and the Leader of Tongtianjiao Went Crazy for Murder.

The plot is okay, but the writing is very confusing. The system has a sense of presence at the beginning, but it can be said that it does not have this thing later. Just a few obvious ones: 1. When I first started writing the diary, the Lich Calamity Tribulation had not yet begun. After the Lich Calamity Calamity ended, the New Heavenly Diary had just been written for one year. By Luya, it had been countless years, and the writing was very messy. 2. It took Shen Nong tens of thousands of years to attain enlightenment. Not to mention whether the time used was reasonable or not. The diary of such a long period of time has never appeared once, and the realm has not changed at all. Does his qualifications have to be useless? 3. There are many typos, please refer to the context for viewing.

Regardless of whether the plot is confusing or not, the original purpose of the protagonist is to get out of the big trap of Conferring God, and then Heaven is under his own control. In the end, it is a bit unreasonable to be afraid of Conferring God. The essence of Conferring God is that no one can use the Jade Emperor, and there is no one in Heaven. People can convince the crowd, but in the end, the protagonist has grasped the beginning of becoming a god. Whether to become a god or not is just a matter of one sentence. Even though he still thinks that becoming a god is definitely going to happen, why, the author can't write without the outline of other prehistoric novels? Is this a must-win as a god? Also, I think the strength of Hongjun written by the author is still too strong. It basically requires all the saints to work together to fight. In the end, only two saints, a sub-sage and a little Taiyi retreated? Does this conform to the author's setting for Hongjun? And the protagonist, who is just Taiyi, dares to jump out and publicly stand up to Hongjun. Where does he have the courage? With Hongjun's strength, the protagonist doesn't know when he will die. How can he be a waste? This is not even counting the mutual aggression between the saints. The protagonist only has two saints in his hands, one is Tongtian and the other is Nuwa. He wants to defeat Hongjun and other saints. At most, he can add Pingxin to play with wool. What is the difference between this and the judge and supervisor in the court who are facing each other? If the other side wants to play with you, they will compete with you in stratagems. If they don't want to play, they will compete with you. I will kill you directly, one life at a time, what can you do, don't say anything, you ran to the underworld and Pingxin protected you, Hongjun and Pingxin counterattacked, the Four Swords of Tongtian Zhuxian hit the Second Saint of the West and Yuan Yuan, Nuwa barely held back Taiqing, and then a group of people attacked the protagonist. If they can't defeat the people around the protagonist, why can't they hold them back? The Western religion Kachan and the reincarnations of various Chaos Demon Gods can't defeat the other people around the protagonist? Even if there is all kinds of disunity and intrigues on the opposite side, do you still want to overthrow the protagonist with the strength of a great Luo Jinxian? After living for so long, I don't have any tricks. It's too easy to kill the protagonist.

It's so good at inking. A saint feels like a spinning top. It's dead and spinning. 9.9 Is a bit too much.

When he was the Human Emperor, it was clear who wrote the three emperors in the diary. Later, Hongjun said that the three emperors had been decided, and he was shocked, making the protagonist seem wise.

It feels like everything was written by AI. The protagonist inexplicably changed from Emperor Ziwei to Emperor of Heaven.

The plots in the front and back have completely changed. It feels like they are not written by the same author. They are two completely different books.

I feel like there are so many ghostwriters, I'm not good at math, and there are always contradictions😑

The plot is confusing and inconsistent

It's a mess, the author himself forgot about the few chapters he wrote earlier.

The plot is contradictory and inconsistent. I can only read the first forty chapters.