Cannon Fodder Cultivating Immortality

The beginning is okay, but the end is terrible. There is no common sense about cultivating immortals. The foundation-building monks can't fly, and the golden elixir monks can't fly! The protagonist is Sun Wukong. After being tempered by a volcano, he became physically invincible! I was also defeated by the author's ideas! His parents don't care, his wife doesn't care, and his maid doesn't care. The protagonist is the author himself, right? Alone and helpless! No IQ either!

The beginning of the novel about mortals becoming immortals is a bit slow, but the growth and changes of the protagonist are clearly depicted. Good luck to the author↖(^ω^)↗

The beginning is dull, but it can be said to be slow but steady. It would be helpful to have more space to explain the setting. There are not too many clichéd plots, which is a plus; after nearly a hundred chapters, it gradually becomes a prototype, with endless descriptions of stench and foot bindings. It is hard to listen to it as a background sound, let alone read it slowly... The plot has never been new and has no highlights... Since the overall story is similar to most fairy tales, but the writing style and rhythm are so different, I would rather read those old novels again. PS: In male videos, once the description of beautiful women comes up: graceful figure, concave and convex, skin like snow... These words prove that this is a writer with no ideas.

Relatively slow to heat up, stable development, no poisonous spots so far, give it a good review

It's super good-looking. It's in the first echelon in my eyes. I really enjoyed it. Good luck to the author.

It was okay to read 300 pictures before, but then the nonsense started to increase.

I really don't understand why immortal cultivators don't have to eat. Even immortals have to eat. Otherwise, why would the Queen Mother hold a peach banquet, let alone a young monk in the Qi training period? You can still cultivate immortality without eating. It's really boring without eating. Monsters and beasts also need to eat to cultivate immortality. Why don't people need to eat to cultivate immortality? Isn't it unreasonable?

It's hard to comment on this book. Some parts are very good, but some parts are hard to describe.

I can only say that there are many flaws, the logic of the context is very rigid, and there is an element of deception. It can be said that if you look at it the first time, it looks good, but if you take the time to look carefully, it is just a piece of shit and disgusting.

On the whole, I copied the ways of ordinary people cultivating immortals.