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It's too long-winded. One small thing can take up to ten chapters.

It has a lot of ideas, and it should be a good book, but the main reason is that it is too watery. A small incident of pretending to slap someone in the face was originally a cliché that made me vomit, but the author insisted on writing more than a dozen chapters. A secret realm can fill nearly a hundred chapters. Alas, such a good book was wasted.

Deliberately describing the paragraphs where others look down on and look down on the protagonist, forget about it. I have read so many that probably less than half are describing how others look down on the protagonist. And this is not a combat article, so you can't give the sample to others. You have to make others look down on you. It's a stumbling block. It's disgusting to write like this.

The plot, including the settings of the monsters, are very good. I think it's quite interesting and I will keep following it. It's just that the characters are not vividly described

It's good to watch, and after more than 190 chapters, the main plot begins to become clear.

The previous rhythm was quite good, but when I saw 87, I really couldn't stand it anymore. We obviously got the evidence, but we didn't want to report it and hold them up with items to force them to punish the leaders. Instead, we spoke slowly one by one, for dozens of chapters, and then all the good things were given to the department. To put it bluntly, the common man is not guilty and he has the jade, but he doesn't understand the crime? He also said that there are ethnic groups that can be developed, and the so-called ethnic groups are the earth. Gather all the power of the earth for the protagonist to dress up as thirteen on an alien planet? Still a silly Thirteen. It sounds a bit ugly that the protagonist is just a little Karami. He brought out a bunch of extinct biological materials. Can he hold on? Aliens have memory retrieval technology. What will happen if a three-year-old child dangles billions in bearer checks in front of your eyes?

If a small villain writes so many chapters, who is causing trouble? This author must have just started writing a book, and the pacing is so poor that I basically skipped while reading it. Although the plot is well designed, the chapters are so boring that it makes me sick to my stomach.

Let's call it normal first The latest chapters 264~333, dozens of chapters are all in the secret realm. I don't know how many chapters I can write in the future, which will pave the way for the person Lin Yexin is looking for when he loses his memory (that is, pig's feet)

It's too watery. Doesn't the author charge for water? Here, Ba Suo handed me some materials. There are so many chapters and I haven't finished one chapter. I've written more than ten chapters and I haven't finished yet.

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