Monster Editor: I Can Create Evil Gods

Wow, so pretty. But a little scared.

There are many books that I have not yet received a positive review from after reading them! I finished reading this book in the past

Very beautiful and creative, the subject matter is novel and unique, the plot is ups and downs and there are few typos.

It's okay. The subject matter is quite interesting. It's a Cthulhu-type editing system article. It's well written in the front. The protagonist does seem like a person from that world and is cautious enough. However, the protagonist is not sure whether it is due to the improvement of strength or some other reason.

To be honest, it is a very thoughtful novel. The setting of combining gods and monsters is interesting. But a few shortcomings must be said: 1. The world view is huge. However, the subsequent plot was not reflected at all. It ended hurriedly with the end of the dreamland, and forcibly dragged the various gods mentioned before to the end and forcibly killed them. To make it clear, it was unfinished. 2. Classification. The level of cultivation of the characters in the novel is very problematic. In the case of the Night Bishop, a clone that absorbs the godhead fragments of a low-level protagonist can break through the past (that is, become a god). This setting is too arbitrary. 3. Plot foreshadowing. Not to mention where the other bishops of the Old God Church were, Heiye was left alone. Why he opened the door to the abyss in the first place, what was on the last five floors of the abyss, what to do with the scarlet that was taken away, the exchanges with some gods with grievances, and the remaining two pillar gods were not explained. It was clear that there were holes that had not been filled. 4. Character design. Let's look at the designs of various female characters in the novel. . . Except for Jun Shang, there is no need to write about women and have vague emotions (actually, there is no need to force Shang Jun Shang, it is just for the sake of having a female protagonist). The emotional expression is basically not good, but the author must write it (maybe novels with female protagonists are more interesting?). There is no need for the little girl to appear in the final plot. It is better to end it with a man fighting the protagonist to the death (the author also specially wrote about the protagonist's eyes when she breaks through, I thought it was some kind of foreshadowing). Moreover, the novel focuses on the fusion of monsters, but the author did not make full use of this creative ability in the later period. Instead, he simply used the bonuses of monsters to fight, and even using pets was forced. (It's better not to abandon the original interesting gameplay) In fact, there are problems with these points. The overall plot is still very good and the writing is also very smooth. The main reason is that the idea is very good. I sincerely hope that the author's next book can be better. (I read it in two days, so I may have said something wrong, so please forgive me)

The author writes very well, the subject matter is unique in the entire Internet, and the writing style also supports the subject matter. The most important thing is: it is not exaggerated at all!

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Overall, this book is okay. The plot is exciting. It tells the story of Su Ziyu's growth from a small character in a mental hospital to an extremely powerful being. The author is very imaginative and shows us a world where the weak and the strong eat the strong. The image of Su Ziyu is well portrayed, showing no mercy when facing enemies and being amiable when facing family and friends. However, there were a lot of typos, and it ended up being unfinished. If it wasn't unfinished, I believe this book would still be pretty good. Looking forward to the author's next book😄

The writing got worse and worse later on, and the combat power system was in chaos and collapsed, and was abandoned.

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