Doomsday Hegemony

It's quite good. At first, I thought it would be a clichéd plot, but after reading for a while, I found that the author's portrayal of the main characters was very profound. Lin Chen's character is fleshed out and full of emotion, and Lin Ya's personality change is not rushed. The only thing I felt was that Tianlang's resources were too easy to obtain and the distribution was too lavish.

The beginning was quite good. It just didn't get as good towards the end. I wonder how the author plans to develop the story later. Or you could write about a cultivation world. After all, that's a possible approach. There's one I read that was initially a commercial novel, but later on, everyone switched to a cultivation/immortal cultivation theme. So, what you've written is similar to that novel I read. ✅

I still really like the storyline of this book, but the characters and plot are just too ridiculous. There's absolutely no build-up for Li Ying getting together with the male lead. It's said earlier that Li Ying likes the male lead, but the male lead's feelings for Li Ying aren't explained at all. And then they just get together because he helped her out of a predicament? That's too easy!

Ha! Calling others saints! They're trash! The protagonist isn't a saint, is he? He looked at the items himself and didn't steal them. He picks up women! He kills people randomly! I think it's awful!

A pig-like female character drags down the entire plot and makes it all garbage. Is the author a woman? This kind of plot usually reflects a woman's inner thoughts. Is the female protagonist the biggest flaw in this book?

The male lead's relationship with Li Ying felt completely undeveloped; there was almost no background story about her beforehand, and it was unclear why he fell for her. Seeing them together was awkward, and the earlier plot felt flat and uneventful.

I don't usually give bad reviews for books. I usually give good reviews even if I haven't read it. But I really can't stand this book. 1. The zombies advance so fast, how did humanity manage to hold them off? The protagonist held them off for 10 years in his previous life. 2. The protagonist's only romantic relationships are with his parents and his sister.

The story was alright, but it ended too quickly. I hope the author can fill in the gaps, especially the later parts about the cultivation world. Also, the protagonist's doting on his younger sister was a bit excessive and felt unrealistic. It felt like a lot of chapters were ruined by the sister-doting aspect. I hope future works can improve on this. 😃

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The protagonist's family is either incredibly virtuous or has some serious issues. The writing is so drawn out yet the scope is so grand; the protagonist spends hundreds of chapters developing his character while still only at the Qi Refining stage? Let alone any powerful figures mentioned.