Douluo: Spirit Pearl Divine Sword

I like this novel. I have read too many Dou Luo fan novels, and they are all either licking Tang San or licking the Wuhun Palace. I am tired of reading them. I finally found a book that doesn't lick either of them. The martial arts, talent, strength, and IQ are all online. The two heroines, Ning Rongrong and Qian Renxue, are very good and worth reading.

This book completely reflects the poor quality of the writer. Jun Tianling's double standard of not losing to Tang San and the writing method of suppressing the original work to prove the author's point of view. The plot is average and the character creation is pure imitation. Especially the part where she created the Shrek Tiandou version made me laugh.

The first one is okay, but the second one is completely honest. The inheritance of Shushan is higher than that of Tangmen. If you don't study hard and secretly learn Tangmen's exercises, you are out of your mind. Both sects, Xianmen V and martial arts fools, know which one is good. When you see someone, you will dig deep and become your own. Can't you write well about yourself? You won't be able to write without Tang San. The subsequent plot is basically worthless.

The best Douluo article I have ever read. The two heroines, Ning Rongrong and Qian Renxue, don't read it if you like pure love, because the emotional line is a little bad, although Douluo is not monogamous, and the protagonist is also the strongest. He could have three palaces and six concubines, but only marrying two is fine, but the emotional line is not well drawn, so he looks like a scumbag The protagonist is a member of the Qibao Glazed Sect. He is neutral in the early stage, sees Tang San clearly in the middle stage, and turns against Tang in the middle and late stages. Tang San, Tang Hao, and Tang Chen died indirectly in the hands of the protagonist, but each one has a reason, and it is very reasonable. There are two slightly surprising points ① Around Chapter 23, I once pretended to be a pig and ate the tiger, but after two or three chapters, I was able to accept it. Later, the article also gave a reason that the protagonist's character was not good enough at that time, so he changed it later and no longer pretended to be a pig and ate the tiger. ② Around Chapter 189, Ye Lingling couldn't figure out her status. She had a heart attack and wanted to save Zhu Zhuqing, but she didn't have the ability, so she asked Ning Rongrong for help and asked Ning Rongrong to tell the protagonist. However, Ye Lingling had not joined the Qibao Glazed Sect at that time, and she was not particularly familiar with the protagonist. I feel that these two are a little bit toxic. Overall, this book is super good. It is the first time I have read such a long Douluo novel and I can read it. I highly recommend it🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Protagonist: Mary's cancer + second-hand goods + dog licking. Quick abandon from Douyin!!! From about 20 chapters onwards, it feels like it was written by a junior high school student. The setting is that he is an adult soul traveler, but in reality he is still an immature middle school kid. There are obviously simpler and more efficient ways to deal with conflicts, but it has to be hard-wired. When others ask about the background of the protagonist, you just say I am a disciple of Sword Douluo. Whoever dares to mess with you has to "honestly" (original text) say that you have low-status parents. Later, Ye Lingling can make the protagonist stop with two sentences. He is really a licking dog and a half-cat.

It's hard to explain in one sentence. First of all, I teach others about my cheat skills everywhere, and I tell others about my twin martial arts casually, for fear that others won't know. The point is that I told you not to tell others before, and I also teach others about my cheat skills. If it weren't for the protagonist, he would have died long ago.

After reading the seventy chapters, I determined that the idea was a piece of cake. The author has never done market research or had any experience in online writing. It is really too much to be able to write about the poisonous points that were criticized ten years ago now. The protagonist has no wealth at all and has no growth. He likes to do random things and show off some of his treasures. He doesn't have a mouth where he should have a mouth. When he has a mouth, he looks anxious when he has a big mouth. He doesn't look like an adult but like a kindergarten kid. I was personally attracted to Douyin by listening to novels. The main selling points that attracted me were the perspectives of Fairy Sword Golden Finger and Qibao Glazed Sect. This is rare in various Douluo fanfics on the market, at least I haven't seen it before, and it feels very novel. My personal expectation is that the protagonist can use the Fairy Sword and Golden Finger to write a feeling of cultivating immortality in Douluo Continent and then reducing the dimension to attack. This and the emotional line of Ning Rongrong's childhood sweetheart are the reasons why I read it. But overall, it doesn't meet my expectations at all. The author is even unsure of where he wants to write the outline. For example, if you make good friends with Tang San, then make good friends. If you make good friends with Tang San, you may turn against him for some reason, or you may directly kill Tang San. However, if you originally planned to make friends with Tang San, but later said that you would oppose Tang San for the herbs in Dugu Bo Garden, it would be very contradictory. As a time traveler, with the advantage of foresight, is it difficult to make a plan from the beginning? The consequence of an uncertain outline is that the main plot is confusing, readers cannot get the selling point, and it is suspected of trying to sell the dog's meat. When it comes to the main plot, it becomes even more humorous. Initially, it was to prevent the Qibao Glazed Sect from being destroyed in the future Wuhun War, which would lead to his own demise. However, the author found that the target was too far away and just passed it in one stroke. After speeding through the Dugu Bo Yaoyuanzi, the Immortal Grass was passed in one shot. He also had to hold his Soul Batch Master Competition and had to form a team. No, buddy, you started practicing at the age of six and became a Soul Lord at the age of eight. The god-level twin spirits also bring experience bonus buffs. The training resources are because relying on the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect is the same as turning on the blue and green modifiers. Tang San could become a god in more than ten years just by picking up leftovers. You have been more successful than Tang San for seven or eight years, and you can't even become a Soul Emperor for seven or eight years? Just purely funny. After talking about the main plot, let me talk about the protagonist's golden finger. Let me first state that I have never played Fairy Sword 3. I subjectively think that the protagonist's martial arts is not up to par. Even after reading Chapter 70, I didn't even have a picture of the protagonist using his skills. The fights were completely turn-based. Finally, let's comment on the poisonous points within the seventy chapters. The first poisonous point that impressed me was the plot where the Tiandou students picked trouble. The protagonist really didn't talk when he should. He just said that his master, Sword Dou Luo Chenxin, was the end of it, but he insisted on saying that his father was a warehouse manager. I understand that you want to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, but you are like a nt. If someone wants to kill you, why don't you quickly chop the person with a sword? You can even wait until someone is discovered and even ask an auxiliary soul master to save the person. Chunchun is confused, okay, a passerby NPC is kicked to death on the side of the road. There are so many scenes, I would think that you are ignorant of the world, and I will personally come out to settle any big issues. The second poisonous point is to help Tang San. Do you want to make friends or kill him? After helping, make friends or make enemies, or make enemies. If you want to observe Tang San, can't you watch him from a distance? Confuse. The third poisonous point is that in Chapter 70, there is a random plot of mandarin ducks. What does Senior Sister Leng have to do with you, so you just pull a red line and introduce someone to her? Could it be that when the author is at work, he likes to say in front of two people in the office that I think you two are a good match and get married? How do you deal with your colleagues? Do you want to be cool? The key protagonist is still an eight-year-old kid. If he were an elder, he could still be called a matchmaker.

Yin Yang didn't move Xiao Wu's evil thoughts, how could Tang Hao stop him? Tang Hao asked if he could give some face, but Yin Yang didn't listen. Pig's Foot even said that Tang Hao had offended Yin Yang. The degree of double standard was even worse than that of the original Tang San. He also asked him to give Yin's leg bones to Yin Yang to apologize. I was really speechless.

The writing in the Douluo fanfic is okay, but there is something wrong with the emotional line.

It's very good, very creative, and the logic is clear and tight. It's one of the better ones I've seen. The characterizations are very good, especially those of Ning Fengzhi and Chen Xin.