The Stand User in the Marvel Universe

The subject matter of this book is interesting, and the first half of the story is really exciting, but there are too many things to criticize later on. First of all, I feel that the protagonist's character changes abruptly. In the early stage, he was indifferent but valued the people around him. Reason and sensibility coexisted, and everything was under control. But later on, he felt a bit arrogant, less rational, and always trying his best; Secondly, there are a lot of big holes that have not been filled. It is not like an open ending can make up for it. For example, what is the specific ability of Little Crystal and how to use it? Besides, after Little Crystal fell asleep, she raised her mouth when she turned to ashes, and there was no follow-up. There was no way to wake her up, and there was no further explanation in the end. You spend money once, and you promised to get a gold experience, and I have never seen you use Killer Queen, a one-hit kill stand, a few times, and the plot of Spider-Man stopped abruptly when the hero did not return. At least it was finished. After reading it, I felt that it was not finished, and hundreds of chapters could be written; And many characters no longer appear, such as the little Crystal mentioned earlier, as well as the protagonist's good brothers, the two Jessica sisters. His good brother may be the only person who is really good to him after he time travels, and the two Jessica sisters have a mutual affection for him. With the character of the protagonist who cares about his friends, I really regret that he does not appear after the New York War. I would like to have a special chapter. The protagonist visits them, sees that they are doing well, and feels relieved, and then leaves silently to face new challenges. I still hope to be able to sell a little sentiment; There is also the change in the plot style. In the early stage, the focus was on a protagonist who has new abilities every time and becomes stronger quickly. He is invincible, defiant, and cool. The theme is also funny and relaxed. But in the later stage, the plot begins to be serious. The protagonist is always using ice. He uses more of the stand-in drawn in the early stage. He rarely uses new abilities. When he does, he only comes out. , And at the same time, because I won't say what the krypton gold was drawn out later, it was used very abruptly. For example, when the Infinity Stones were destroyed, I immediately thought of Crazy Diamond. I forgot whether the one I used once (really once) was an experience card, but even if it is an experience card, you are so rich, why not collect some wreckage, and then use the krypton gold to draw out the crazy diamond and restore it directly (JOJO Once the world dies, the soul cannot return to the body, and the Crazy Diamond is useless, so there is no need to worry about Gao Tianzun's soul. Even if the infinite gems are powerful, it can be said that the game characteristics, or the effect of this book), are a bit separated from the substitute messenger. Let's see how to use the substitute. Where is the substitute? It's like setting up such a wave just to tease the plot of Avengers 4; Not to mention that the protagonist seems to have forcibly reduced his intelligence. By the time Avengers 3 is completed, the protagonist has taken it into consideration and made correct choices and judgments. However, the protagonist seems to have never seen the plot of Avengers 4. As a result, he will give suggestions to Avengers at the beginning, but then let them go with the flow. Although I can understand that this book may have started earlier, and Avengers 4 only came later. The protagonist probably has not read it, but you At least I said "There's nothing I can do about it. After all, I only went to Avengers 3 when I time-traveled, so they can only let them figure out the rest of the plot on their own." It would not make me feel like the protagonist was forcibly reduced to intelligence. As for the little spider, the author probably watched the trailer of No Return for Heroes and wrote an impromptu paragraph. The feature film was not released until the end of the year, and he wanted to finish it quickly, so there was no follow-up; There is also the problem of insufficient roles for the protagonist in the later period. A lot of time is spent telling the Marvel plot we know, and then the protagonist appears for a short time. This is a story rhythm problem. It is most serious when you want to finish it at the end. Brother, how anxious are you to finish it? As for the content of the last forty chapters, almost half of it is to push the plot without the role of the protagonist. The protagonist is very strong and cannot be marginalized. The last dozens of chapters are the hardest hit area. Maybe there is nothing to write after finishing the Avengers plot; In the end, I was speechless after watching Marvel VSDC. It was too forceful and I won't say it. Originally, I thought that one person should deal with each other, and then the protagonist would show off the whole show and write a few more chapters. But when I saw that there were only three or four characters, I had an ominous premonition. As a result, there was no role for the protagonist at all, so I mentioned it. Grandpa made the whole show by himself. How anxious are you to finish it? It feels like it's unfinished. In short, this is a good work, the subject matter is attractive enough, and the early stage is also very interesting, but it still has shortcomings in the later stage. The main reasons are that the story rhythm is unstable, the plot advancement is stiff, many plots are not finished, there are differences before and after the completion, and the protagonist is marginalized. I hope more improvements can be made. Although I analyze that few people will be patient enough to read it in a long time. After all, it has been so many years. It ended in 2019. It is already 2024. It has been five years. The author probably can't see it.

There is nothing interesting about this book since going to the universe. It is as if it were written by a different person. The killings are not decisive enough, let alone the villains who are still digging holes. Goldfinger also has no sense of existence. It can be regarded as a good book if it is written in the JoJo style, but the result is that the nose is not the nose, the eyes are not the eyes, and it is weird.

The writing is so disgusting that I dare not read it. Goodbye.

The front is fine, but the further back it gets, the more abstract it becomes, and it doesn't feel suitable for Jojo. Most of the time, it just stops and starts, killing the emperor with just a touch. When I picked the Pegasus, I thought it was a foreshadowing. Later, I would use the cavalry to maneuver, but in the end, it was just a tool horse.

There are too many (River Crabs), which does not generally affect the perception…

I have read more than 200 chapters, which is not much, but the protagonist is gradually outrageous. The protagonist's aura is too obvious and overwhelms the combat power. For example, the protagonist is short of money. At the beginning of the Iron Man plot, why not buy Stark Industries stocks? And the fastest way to get money is not to rob bank vaults, but you don't do it, and you have to let others do it. It's a watery plot.

It looks good in front but not so good behind the crystal

After reading it, I feel like I have seen a brand new world view and a brand new and unexpected plot.

When will the author publish the second JoJo book?

The front part is okay, but the back part is as pure as changing people. In the front part, it can be seen that it is a time travel. I know the development of the plot and can change the direction. But in the back part, the protagonist seems to have lost his memory. The plot of the movie in his previous life is as if he has never seen it. He just rewrote the plot of the movie exactly the same. So what does your protagonist do? Wouldn't it be better to just watch the movie again?