Spirit Cards Descend Upon the World

The content of the article is very good. It has the courage to develop readers' imagination and improve readers' reading ability. The concept is very clever. The only drawback is that the update is a bit slow. I hope the author will work hard to continue writing. In short, this book is very good and highly recommended👍👍👍👏

Five-star praise, absolutely wonderful, the protagonist is not all smooth sailing, all-around is exquisite, and he handles the emotional passages very well, not the Holy Mother, it is very consistent with my favorite works, I hope the author will update soon👍🏻😄

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One of the things that is not well written is that the male protagonist has just met his parents. 1. The male protagonist came from time-travel, and the relationship was so good when they first met? Even if I inherited this person's memory, I think there should be a bit of a barrier. It's not like I said to his mother, "Guess what has changed in me?" 2. He has never seen his parents in this world since time travel, so he always thinks about them. Even if he inherits the memory, it should still be a little strange, right? ? ? ? ? If I say I'm wrong, don't scold me, it's just a comment.

I read Chapter 115 and the plot was average. The protagonist is the Holy Mother, so what if there are dangerous murders in the secret realm? It's not like you haven't killed someone before (a wanted criminal who sells blue crystal cores), your trump card has been exposed, and you let the person go, for fear that others won't know your trump card. And are you particularly close to that man or woman? Before the relationship reaches a certain level, you start to help others evolve, for fear that the secret will not be exposed, right? Earlier, I was treating old man Ning's spiritual beast, but the conditions were not equal. If he couldn't be cured, he would die. No matter what, he did a good job of licking the dog.

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It feels average. The male protagonist's beast is too strong and of too high quality. Every time it is an instant kill, there is nothing interesting. Every fight talks too much. The character description is a bit monotonous. Basically, it is shock, joy, solemnity, spirit cards, and weapons. There are no obstacles.

I have read this book. There are about dozens of pictures. So far, I have seen that the bear treated by the Su family was treated, and then it was really full of poisons. Some of the poisons in the front were a little ignorant. I can understand that the IQ really dropped infinitely when I got to this place. I knew that the author wanted the protagonist to show off. Then the idiot in it suggested that if you are not cured, you will be buried with him or something, or you will be killed, etc., And then the protagonist directly agreed. I want to ask, is it necessary? Forcing this kind of complex is the granddaughter of the other party who asked you to treat the bear. The other party doesn't trust you and is still kicking his nose and face like this. It's fine if you don't treat it. Just leave. You still have to make this kind of bet and you have to be threatened. Is the protagonist prone to masochism? The three views here are not very correct. I estimate that this book will be read by many people, probably children, primary school students, junior high school students, etc. If you create these plots, they will enjoy it, but it will also mislead them.

I remember that in the super beast breeding system, in Chapter 528, Duan Tianfeng's son was named Duan Yi.

The author made the biggest typo in the 26th page. On the ninth page, someone smiled at Lin Ran and hoped for improvement. Thank you! (This review is a bit long, so please read it patiently.) I will also comment more on this book in the future. Well, I am reading it now. If there are typos, I will point them out and ask the author to improve them greatly. Thanks! This book is still very new and really good. I am reading it now. Have no idea. What happened to the book? I want to ask, will this book open a harem? Well, I generally don't like harems too much. Please give the author a big reply. I know that the author has to write another book when writing this book. I understand that it is not easy to update slowly. But please correct the typos. I also give a big boost to the author of the praise! Don't care what those anti-fans say, you just need to know that we, the book friends, are guarding you behind you!