I'm Already Invincible. Why Are You Only Asking for My Forgiveness Now?

I endured the embarrassment and read Chapter 16, and I really couldn't stand it anymore... If the author reads the comment section, he'd better fix the settings as soon as possible. Jiang Hao's system plug-in is a bit new, but his relationship with the Lin family is simply too much. At first, I thought that the Lin family had no choice but to have their eldest son live in the slums until he was 20 years old. However, despite knowing that he was living in the same city, he refused to take his son back for 20 years. However, they had time to give birth to a 2-year-old second son and adopt a goddaughter. Are the Lin family and his wife crazy? The relevant personnel of Fenglei Martial Arts School and the Lin family are usually very upright, but as soon as they meet Jiang Hao, they start to lose their wits and conflict for the sake of drama. It is really embarrassing to watch. Author, please think of a solution...

Good-looking, very good-looking,

The protagonist is mentally ill, and many of his actions make people sick of stupidity. The word count is even worse.

Why is there no heroine?

The whole text is very verbose, emphasizing the relationship with the Lin family back and forth, without being decisive, and the plot is just like a star-swallowing routine, which is really neither fish nor fowl.

What are you writing about?

The writing is beautiful and not too poisonous. 1. When the protagonist left the branch, a man named Lin came to see the protagonist. As he was talking, the protagonist got angry and directly admitted that he killed the person and that he had to use some poison. 2. If the author writes this kind of system in the next book, he hopes to add a martial arts synthesis function, which is to synthesize martial arts or body skills into new martial arts. When those families see that it is their own secret technique, trouble will come to them. Although we are not afraid of trouble, we don't want to ask for trouble. I hope the author can adopt my suggestion. 3. The author borrowed some of his martial arts or abilities from Japanese and Chinese comics, such as the indestructible black flames (there are similar ones in fairy tales), Orochimaru-ryu's substitute technique, the realm of warriors, and some things similar to Luo Feng, including artificial intelligence and alien corpses. Luo Feng seems to be a clone, and the protagonist directly seizes the body. Based on these suggestions, I give this book five stars and recommend it!

Those who have watched Swallowing the Starry Sky can tell at a glance that in addition to the lack of system, many plots have the shadow of Swallowing the Starry Sky.

The protagonist's lack of IQ should be inherited from his family, and his ability to grow depends on the protagonist's halo. It feels quite superficial.

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