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Very pretty

Like the previous commenter, the writing is long and the language is protracted, and you can't feel the horror when reading it.

The pacing is too slow. You can quickly see the principle in the first copy. It took a long time to write. Did the female character also forcefully add the scene?

There are too few clues. From the beginning to the end, it is clear that there is only one way to jump, and there is no other content. I keep describing how to run away repeatedly, and the first level can be described in one paragraph. The prompt implies that you can escape by jumping, but the protagonist never believes it. He kept hiding and running around. There was really no place to run and I jumped down. There is too little content, and a few sentences are repeated over and over again.

There are a lot of bugs and loopholes, and the writing is quite baffling.

More updates, I hope the heroine is Tang Xuan, Zhang Yong and Zhan Yue make a happy couple

It looks great. I gave you the first copy.