After Being Targeted by a Ghost, I Turned into a Demon

The plot is exciting and the sentences are fluent. In my opinion, except for the ridiculous number of typos and the fact that it gets a little watery after 150 chapters, this book is still very readable.

Confused logical thinking

I would like to give you a suggestion: write more panels. There are too few now. On average, there is one panel per chapter, and one panel is half a chapter. This is not enough. I suggest you write all the panels in each chapter, otherwise it will not be enough to read.

The description of the country is not reasonable. I feel that the description of the country is too bad (๑❛ᴗ❛๑)

There's no reason, it just looks good.

It looks so good. There are two articles on the attribute panel. I almost memorized the five or six articles on the attribute panel. There is also a full 10,000 grievances and it is easy to kill. I told myself not to look too ugly. The good guys at 5000 are very excited. Also, the copy and paste attribute panel is really interesting. I have been learning for a long time and I am still not practicing there. Also, let me ask you, in the early stage, when I saw the corpse, I was not afraid. In the later stage, I became less courageous. I was so scared when I saw a corpse. The pasted property panel, Gui Wenwen, etc. Basically didn't appear in the later stage and were used. But there is no property panel. The overall evaluation is too early.

There are too many typos, and each chapter is almost 200+ words long because of the personal panel. Others are fine

The protagonist has been looking for ghosts to kill since he became a ghost? Hehe. Get a hammer. It could have been upgraded faster, but I feel like the main character is still the Virgin.

Everyone who reads it knows that there are so many typos that I can barely bear it, but the constant copying and pasting is too much.

In the later period, the book is super bad, as good as a school beauty. In the early stage, there were a lot of typos, and even the plot that I wrote is repeated in the next chapter. In summary, it is a bad book, and the beauty is average. I will give it 3 points out of 10.