Old Stories of Burglary

The plot moves forward quickly without dragging out. The disadvantage is that the main plot is not well conceived, and I feel like I can guess the outline. Regarding the fight for the Immortality Pill, the male protagonist and his father should have eaten it or have related skills. Zhou said that the male protagonist's father has not changed from decades ago. The two men suddenly appeared. The male protagonist has a dual personality. Both of them should be old monsters. Jiade has been tracking the Dragon Mark Immortality Pill and has focused on the hero's family. The military commander of the hero's family has also been searching. There are people from both sides of the two tombs, the third, fourth and Section Chief Wang. Master Qi should be from Jiade. It is impossible for Lao Jianghu to take elixirs without knowing it for no reason. As soon as the male protagonist's jade pendant appeared, Jiade guessed the location in a second. After Master Qi came out, he did not hide far away but went in again, leading the male protagonist to the next tomb. Li Wei cooperated with him. The male protagonist's father helped raise the price at the auction, and he also knew about it. The male protagonist's character is like an NPC that drives the plot, being played by both sides.

This is awesome, brother. I can't stand it anymore. I beg you more, battalion commander.

So far, it looks pretty good! I hope the author will not stop updating...

It's really nice, but there's just not enough of it. Please update it quickly.

Nice

The writing is good/the plot is flat and powerful/the sense of substitution is strong