From the Start, I Became Harry Potter's Senior

Nice

After reading Chapter 45, I can feel that the author wants to write something, but the writing style is not good and the plot is a bit confusing. The emotional line is also strange. I can't tell whether it is a single heroine or dual heroines.

I always want to write something of my own, but my writing is specious but plain.

Don't know what to express

I can feel that the author has a lot to express, but the writing is not strong enough. Some parts of the writing are vague, and the emotional line of the heroine is too confusing.