Snake Evil

The plot is wonderful, the plot twists and turns are intertwined, and the characters are vividly drawn. I think it is my favorite in this kind of book.

It's not as exciting as expected. Can't you write it well?

Is that mute mother-in-law mute or not?

Can the mute grandma talk? Don't tell the truth

Momojiji, a story that has forty or fifty chapters, but it's not quite right. There's no climax at all, and there's no main story. It's just short ghost stories pieced together!

The plot is exciting, the sentences are fluent, and the writing is brilliant!

What are you writing about? A cow's head is wrong and a pig's trotters are not powerful enough. I can never win unless I fight alone. The plot of pretending is repeated over and over again. A mute can talk for a while and then not. Can I use some snacks? The author should be a boring pretender in reality.

Nice

What a mess! It doesn't look good!

Frequent errors and confusing logic