Heavenly General Qilin Divine Appearance

The author wrote that he forgot about the 8 pieces of blood jade, and the plot was not explained clearly.

Chen Shuwen knew that the male protagonist had a girlfriend and still moved into her arms. The male protagonist agreed to be with someone else, Ma Siran, and then went to change someone else's clothes. How crazy! Although all three are fiancées, he chose Ma Siran to be with him without feeling distant from the others.

There are too few updates, please update more

At first I thought it was good, but later on it started to add a lot of unappealing plot points, which were so long-winded that I stopped following it.

I told the story to my friend, who said it was like a manure truck exploding.

No result, the result is unclear

It's too long-winded, the word count has been shortened, and there are too many typos. I just want to ask, do readers need to popularize stories like Zhong Kui's marriage to his sister in novels? No one can write a spell for a page.

It sucks, there's no ending, what kind of author is this?

Not finished yet?

There's no tail, it's just over, it's so ugly