Destiny Village Keeper

Haha, some of the plots in this book made me burst into laughter. The writing is very good, much better than those other cool articles. The protagonist is a bit unsatisfactory all the way, but at the critical moment, the blessing given by the protagonist's aura is a bit awesome. It would be better if he had more awesome strength. Haha, I still give it a five-star rating.

I am talking about this book from an objective perspective, hoping it will be of some help to readers who have just read it or are currently reading it. I will mainly start with what I think are the shortcomings of this book: 1. The character creation is not very good. The heroine is not clearly portrayed. In the whole book, apart from "I", the character Ji Qianyue appears from the first chapter to the end (appearing nearly 1,500 times). The first 200 or so chapters were basically written around Ji. From this, it can be seen that the author originally wanted to write Ji as the heroine, but maybe because of the readers' comments, he wanted to write Ji to death. There were more than 300 chapters in the middle that did not appear. The characters and the plot were not closely connected, which led to the final attempt to clear up the story but was not very successful. The other female relatives, Lu Wushuang and Ji Qianrou, have fewer roles (only appear more than 500 times at most). They basically just write one paragraph and then replace it with another (even the exit is just one sentence). The character portrayal is not successful and they cannot replace Ji's position. In the end, Ji had to be pulled out and forced to clear her name. Yao Laosi ranks second as a character (more than 2,200 times). He is an important character and follows the protagonist from birth to death, but his style from beginning to end is like a pure novice. 2. Although the story plot has ups and downs, bizarre twists and turns, and is full of imagination, it is not rigorous. The aunt in front of me was obviously dead, but she came back to life mysteriously. Although the reader's grandfather understood it, it was really uncomfortable to read. 3. There is a lot of nonsense and the writing style needs to be improved. There is a lot of nonsense, and it is really painful to read; the word "just a moment" has been used hundreds of times. 4. Failure to grasp the reader's true emotions. For example, Ji mentioned in Chapter 1 above. I read a lot of comments about people wanting to take revenge, but the author simply wrote about beating her up, and said all the time that he wanted to "kill" her. In fact, the audience wanted to see how Ji was tortured, raped and humiliated🤣, her self-esteem was completely shattered, and how Ji was tamed from a proud and arrogant person to a bitch. The first part is just about Ji being arrogant and treacherous. The second part is about Ji doing whatever it takes to achieve her goals and being inhumane. The more she writes, the darker she gets. In the end, she can't even wash it off. But there is still something worthy of recognition, 1. The world view is grand, and after reading it, it feels like "The Three-Body Problem". 2. The plot is okay. . 3. Big imagination and beautiful imagination. Looking specifically at the content of the novel, I won't go into details here. If you can tolerate these shortcomings, it is actually worth reading.

It must be praised, 💩I can't eat it alone, I must give it to everyone to try

Dude, I'm not making a blind comment. In the most vulgar terms, it's just a stone. If the writing had been more delicate, this novel would have had a blast at the beginning, and the plot would have been refreshing. But what happens next, the whole family is killed, the brothers become licking dogs, and they insist on getting married? Isn't this CS? Secondly, the brother obtained an immortal bone and a heavenly book, and burned it for ten thousand years for a passerby disciple? Then make a big wedding and just stud them all, killing almost all the key bosses and then start BBing around? It's pretty cool to still be alive after stud. Jiudaozi disappeared to the point where there were clues and then evaporated directly? Suddenly started changing lanes for no apparent reason? Junior sister was directly given a silver handkerchief? After that, he became a villager again, and the subsequent plot was forced and all kinds of random additions were made. The inexplicable whitewashing is also very awesome. The writing is unsatisfactory. It is confused, made up, and forced to write. It is similar to an elementary school student's article. In the later stage, the number of words is randomly added and copied and pasted. It's a shame that this kind of novel can be published. Newcomers, be sure to read my comments. You only need to read the first thirty and last three articles.

First of all, I am not a bastard. Secondly, I really like every work of Forget Lichou. I think the characteristic of his works is that they are weird and weird. People who haven't read or don't understand the author's other books may find it confusing or even unacceptable, but this is his style! This book has a unique world view, a unique concept, a unique story, and unique characters. It is really interesting to read. The various classical legends and modern jokes interspersed in it complement each other and are really well integrated. The most important thing is that it uses the story to reflect a certain trend of people's hearts and social reality. It makes us "some people are reading novels, and some people are looking in the mirror." This may be what people say "good articles only make sense if they are placed in a certain historical background." I hope the author becomes popular and creates more masterpieces.

I feel so messed up

The plot is a mess, the characters are inconsistent, there are a lot of virgins, and it's disgusting to watch.

After seeing Qingtian Town, I don't want to read anymore. I feel that the more I write, the more boring I feel. It's a pity. It was quite good at the beginning, but now it's a bit high and low. I would like to ask all the friends who are watching, what is the ending of Ji Qianrou and Yao Laosi! ?

What kind of thing is it written? It was normal at first, but later on people started cultivating immortals, and Journey to the West came out. Don't fall into this trap, get a normal one.

What is written at the end has no logic at all?