So, I Became Naruto’s Older Brother

The protagonist's character is somewhat disgusting. He's supposed to be an adult, but his behavior, habits, emotions, thoughts, and knowledge don't reflect the soul of an adult. If you don't want to write, then don't force yourself. If you're just trying to appease your readers, I suggest you write urban female-oriented novels. It's better for male-oriented content to be more normal.

How can you present something so explicit? The writing is terribly mediocre. The plot is a mess. The power levels are poorly handled. The portrayal of a Nine-Tails + Uzumaki clan + Wood Release + Lava Release + Flying Thunder God + Lightning Armor as an elite Jonin is lacking, and the character is threatened by Danzo and severely injured by Kisame, ending up in the hospital.

Your writing is a mess. Did you rig your rating?

It's completely incomprehensible; the sentences are disjointed, the logic is chaotic, and the writing is truly terrible.

There are some typos; I hope the author can overcome them and will definitely write better in the future.

Could you reduce the amount of screen time spent with Tian Tian?

It was cut off halfway through writing.

Almost every piece contains a few typos, and it's impossible to understand without careful review! I hope the author keeps up the good work and writes even better pieces.

The main character looks so uncomfortable.

It looks a bit strange