So, I Became Naruto’s Older Brother

No, please don't separate Naruto and Hinata! They're the official couple, author, please don't mess around with this.

The main character looks so uncomfortable.

How can you present something so explicit? The writing is terribly mediocre. The plot is a mess. The power levels are poorly handled. The portrayal of a Nine-Tails + Uzumaki clan + Wood Release + Lava Release + Flying Thunder God + Lightning Armor as an elite Jonin is lacking, and the character is threatened by Danzo and severely injured by Kisame, ending up in the hospital.

Almost every piece contains a few typos, and it's impossible to understand without careful review! I hope the author keeps up the good work and writes even better pieces.

I believe that although the beginning of the article was poorly written, the later parts will get better and better.

Even AI-generated code is better than yours.

Your writing is a mess. Did you rig your rating?

Could you reduce the amount of screen time spent with Tian Tian?

It's completely incomprehensible; the sentences are disjointed, the logic is chaotic, and the writing is truly terrible.

The writing is really bad, and the plot jumps around so quickly. It jumps to the Chunin Exams so fast, and there are so many plot points missing in between.