Xuanhuan: I Created the Heavenly Secrets Pavilion from the Start!

Hello, stranger from another scene on your phone. Whether you are reading the news during the day or at night, you should pay attention to your health and drink water frequently. Mobile phones radiate a lot of radiation, so don't look at it too much. When you have time, call your family more often and chat about home affairs. Remember to eat on time and take good care of your body. ---Concern from strangers

Overall it looks good -No heroine, no confidante -The introduction has nothing to do with this book, let's just say -The backend is a little confusing, and the ending is a bit rushed (but I feel better than other books that I gave up before I finished them, at least I can finish them)

I don't know when it started, but all articles about trading and the like are meant to trick people into death. I wonder if people nowadays are so egoistic? There is a strong atmosphere of capital.

The plot progresses quickly, the rhythm is tight, the narrative is huge, and the ending is slightly rushed

For me, this is a good book. The introduction and beginning are attractive. The growth is not slow and the length is appropriate. The plot connection is also good. There is no bad ending. I enjoyed reading it without the heroine. It's good.

I can't stand it anymore when I see Bing Xuanzong. What value system is it? Good guy, a big force that has been around for tens of thousands of years is about to be wiped out. But a random elder comes here, takes out two pieces of equipment, and solves such a big problem in minutes? So cheap?

Didn't it say at the beginning that he traveled through time and became the last disciple of Tianji Sect? Later, it was said that it had nothing to do with Tianji Sect, but it was developed at the old site of Tianji Sect. Isn't the Taixu Emperor's son named Jiang Shang? How did he become Jiang Yu? Jiang Shang, the divine son of the Jiang family, started at eighth on the list of geniuses, but how did he become sixth again. The protagonist at the beginning is a time traveler, and then he is cast on the creation.

My head was pounding. There is no limit to how to be a cup, the protagonist is a master, with unlimited means, but he insists on being a cup and waits for others to surrender, and then lets the ups and downs cause trouble, and then destroys them, and then repeats. And right after he was born, he ordered others to steal valuable treasures, and also wanted to portray others as villains. This author has no basic sense of right and wrong, and I don't know who is praising him. I'm stealing from your house, so just hold back and don't say anything. If you can't help it, it's your fault. That's the gangster logic. The rhythm of this book basically follows this routine.

Not bad

It's nice, but the ending is a bit rushed