Heavenly Venerable of Eternal Silence

The realm is higher and lower. How did the author write it? Mad Sword obviously reached the late stage of Human Yuan realm in Lin Fan's secret realm, and then it became the Five Qi realm. The same goes for Xiao Yuan. I thought it was okay at first, forget it now.

I don't know what other people think of it, but I don't like it anyway.

Can't even write the character's name clearly? ?

Oh no, that's all I think it looks good anyway.

The male protagonist has relied on others to remind him from beginning to end. Can such a stupid person survive for three seconds now? That is to say, the author still regards him as a treasure. The male protagonist has no brains at all, and even the villain is N times stronger than the male protagonist. Stupid lack of one

The overall idea is quite clear. The realm of each person is high and low. The names are often mistaken. The protagonist has a tendency to be abused. He is obviously a decisive person. He often loses control at critical moments, causing people to escape and be annoyed.

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There are a lot of typos, and the previous words should not be used indiscriminately.

The further you get to the back, the more stupid the protagonist becomes. He is so arrogant when he goes to other people's places. He needs to be rescued every time. Why can't he think about the dangers of going to that place? Isn't it interesting to call the experts in advance and fight hard every time? Is the fighting power of Duanmu and the Xiao family empty? The protagonist never uses it.

The plot outline is well written, but the details are very confusing, the level is high and low, and certain things are often mentioned repeatedly!