Heaven-Swallowing Art

The first part is very good, but in the middle, The protagonist goes to the sect and goes from the Houtian realm to the Yuanwu realm and finds that he is still a rookie in the sect. That is to say, the outer sect of the protagonist is the core of the inner sect, and the Holy Son has nothing to do with him. The protagonist meets whatever disciple he becomes. I didn't meet anyone in front of the inner door. Once the protagonist becomes an inner sect, all he encounters are inner sects. 2 There are many inconsistencies. If a good guy ranks first in the inner sect competition, many other forces will know about it. My special? Then other forces need to have a more thorough understanding of the Core and the Holy Son. What a contradiction. How could he be so famous? There are people from the other three major sects, and it is written that the strength of many small forces is infinitely close to the four major sects. So many great ones. Why should others know that he is such a bad guy? Also, Zongmen's writing is so verbose. I saw a sect that lasted 500 chapters and the protagonist couldn't even fucking touch the side of the strongest disciple of the first sect. Everyone knows the strength of the protagonist mentioned above. What a contradiction. 3 (It keeps repeating the same thing as in some Shura book. The main character is named Mu Feng. He always offends the little ones and the big ones, so I write it from the beginning to the end.) Every day I meet some old pervert from somewhere. What kind of meat cauldron, what kind of four-yin, what kind of flower-picking bandit. The evil sect. It's all so obscene. 4. It's okay to accept women, but once you talk about it at the beginning, you will accept it later. The author didn't write clearly what he looked like, let alone his personality. Most of the female protagonists are like this, so they just gave him a name. I accepted it without introducing anything else. 5. There are too many side stories. Fifty or sixty chapters have passed since a branch story was written, and the story is the same and repetitive. Go ahead and improve your strength. The young masters of those hermit families who met were better than the protagonist (at that time, the protagonist's strength could not even be touched by the clothes of the stronger ones), which was contradictory.

Author, I will always support you

It was okay at the beginning, but by the 500th chapter, I felt inconsistent. The protagonist had obviously killed the Earth Spirit Realm in the early Yuanwu period, and had a fight with the Demon Lord. But now that he is in the Earth Spirit Realm, don't be a waste. Any Earth Spirit Son will have to beat almost half of his life before he can win miserably. Your Heaven-Swallowing Jue, as well as the Ten Thousand Dragon True Body, haven't produced one in ten thousand years, and returned the cosmic body. Especially when entering the Luoxia Valley, I really don't know what you wrote. The level goes up, but the strength is indeed getting lower and lower, because they are all promoted to the earth spirit realm after entering. Logically, the threat to the protagonist should be the indigenous monsters inside, or the heavenly spirit level. As a result, the crazy senior brother, Li Ran, is on an equal footing with the protagonist, and you still save the universe. Is that consistent?

I originally wanted to watch more, but I couldn't watch it at all. The plot was bland and boring, and there were too many typos. Both the protagonist and the villain were very brainless.

Come on, author, I like this book so much, come on, I love you

I don't object to your editing. Fairy tales and fantasy novels are fictitious. You said it's okay to smash a universe with one punch. But you need to be consistent and at least consistent with the logic you set. You can't win even if you cross a small realm, and it's not a big realm. Then upgrading requires a hundred times the resources, the blood of a divine dragon, martial arts skills far beyond this realm, a super magic weapon that swallows the sky furnace, the protagonist's aura... Are they all eaten by dogs? ?

This protagonist is too useless! The quality of Dantian is more than ten times that of other people's, and it is a Wanlong body. The fight with Han Jiang actually lasted a long time.

Generally speaking, the writing is good, but sometimes the writing is verbose. Come on I hope to become your loyal fan.

This book is very well written and I like it very much.

It's so verbose, just like Tang Monk