Xuanhuan: I Created the Heavenly Secrets Pavilion from the Start!

It's well written, but it's not meant for people to read.

After reading the first few chapters, I feel that the male protagonist is a bit low-key and invincible. He is like a monkey on the inside. He pretends to be cool and cool on the surface. Such a male protagonist is really not lovable.

It's disgusting, it's extremely poisonous. The protagonist asked someone to go to someone else's holy place to steal something, and then Blade Armor came to the door and asked people to steal it. It's okay. The key is to write it as if the protagonist is right. It's disgusting.

It's better to write Boss Chen's book properly.

Traveling through a fantasy world, I was robbed of my marriage by the empress at the beginning, and coveted by the sect leader's sister for her beauty. From then on, I was forced to eat soft food. Unfortunately, I became a cultivator, and was constantly pushed back by all kinds of suggestions. I can become stronger by pushing back. Cultivation of swordsmanship, automatic cultivation of Kung Fu, come and take a look, just click in to watch. At the beginning, the swordsmanship is at full level to kill all the heavens

In this kind of novel, you must bear in mind that the world is unkind and treats everything as a rotten dog. The protagonist must be cold and ruthless. He must not be unable to walk when he sees a woman all day long. He must think about being a saint in front of others all day long. You will show off everywhere.

I was pushed to this book, and I'm wondering if I should go back and reflect on myself.

Awesome

In a world without a great emperor, the protagonist kills quasi-emperors like pigs and dogs, and is he still regarded as a minor role by others? The villains all have brain problems

If you don't even want to write down the book on Cultivation of Immortality, why would you have the nerve to start a new book?