My Restaurant in the Pokémon World

How can I put it this way? I liked this book better. I read it without skipping a beat. However, it was quite bland and there were some holes left unfilled at the end. I can only say that it ended too quickly and the plot was not particularly exciting. I thought it was okay.

How can I put it, the plot is okay, but it's very repetitive, and it's always repetitive. One sentence has to be written in two or three sentences to introduce it. The items and characters that have appeared have to be introduced again when they appear again, and they are introduced again and again. It's too much. Like his 🐴 Pirate King, if memories are used as water in the main film, who can bear it?

Water, water is outrageous, especially the sentence that it's hard to leave one's homeland is really on point! Moreover, the author still has two fatal problems. One is that the author does not know much about cooking, but he writes about chefs; the second is that the author does not know much about Pokémon, but he writes about Pokémon fan fiction.

It's okay, but the author doesn't distinguish between mythical beasts and fantasy beasts

It's too watery. I started talking about traveling in about ten chapters, but after fifty chapters I haven't even taken a step yet. One dish is enough for one chapter. It feels like the author didn't understand Pokémon carefully at all. The green onion duck who hasn't been trained much eats the moves of Death's Coffin without losing any energy? You don't need to bind the elf balls to conquer the elf?

This novel is as if it were written on the beach, the water is a mess. I have never written about Pokémon seriously before, one chapter for each dish. I have been planning to travel for two and a half years, and I am still saving money. I don't know what the point of hanging up is. . . Get stronger and cook better food? And then continue to get stronger? Keep cooking? I can understand this before, but it continues to be like this. What is the significance of your background with Pokémon? It's better to cook and open a harem. . .

It feels like a light novel that is too bland, and everyone in the book will laugh out loud and cry. As mentioned earlier, the protagonist is special like this. Now it seems that everyone is special and has incredibly large tear ducts.

There are many plots in this book

Author, you missed a lot of pictures. It shows more than 1,000. Why do you only have more than 500?

I feel like this book is pretty good, but the problem is that there are some holes that I haven't filled in yet.