Soul Land: The Celestial Eye of Huo Yuhao

Overall, it looks good. There may be a little bit of ink in the front. In terms of foreshadowing, the author buried a lot in writing this, but maybe he buried a lot of things and didn't fill in the rest. He wrote a housekeeper in the front, and wrote a lot of Dai Luoli's plot, but the two of them seemed to have no use in the back. Even Huo Yuhao didn't go to see the housekeeper when he returned to the White Tiger Duke's Mansion for revenge. The plot is actually quite good. There are many female protagonists, but they are not studs. When you see a female, you have to go for it. Then there is the revenge part of the White Tiger Duke's Mansion. Emmmm, it was a bit thunderous but not rainy. He assassinated the duchess and put the blame on Dai Huabin. Others who bullied his mother only secretly poisoned them to make them die inexplicably. How can I say that this kind of novel is to be enjoyable. I feel like this is not comfortable at all. They are already famous geniuses far and wide, and their military power is not inferior to the titled Douluo. He can't make a big fuss when he goes back and moves his mother's grave. Why is he still here?

Let me say this first: the author's writing is considered very good among fanfics. Whether it is the characterization of the characters or the later story logic, it is considered very clever among most of the fanfics I read. You can take a look and see that the ending is not particularly satisfactory.

It's a mess. 80% Of the text in the whole book is in water. The difference between blank chapters is hundreds of thousands of words written in a fool's errand. There are a lot of useless descriptions and they are all anecdotes. At first I thought it was a foreshadowing. But later I found out that Chun Chun just wrote wherever he thought and skipped seven or eight chapters without looking back. It was incredible.

In fact, the plot is very good, but the shortcoming is that the ending is a bit sloppy. It would be great if there could be a sequel similar to Dou San and Legend of Gods. I really hope there will be a sequel.

After watching it, the first and middle stages were okay, but the later stages were completely messed up. It feels so fragmented that it doesn't even feel like it was written by the same author. Many holes dug in the early and middle stages were left unfilled, and even the heroine was left alone in the end. I really couldn't stand it. If you can't remember so many people, why don't you write so many heroines? The relationship line with Snow Emperor is even more careless. The only way to enhance the relationship is that heaven-defying soul fusion. And Ye Gu Gu Yi, who spent so much pen and ink on it, could not find this person in the end😓. After all, she became a first-level god, and she didn't take anyone with her in the final fight, so why did you write about her? There is also Long Aotian's inheritance of the God of War, and he even sent people to the God Realm to fight Dai Mubai. I didn't even write about it, and I don't know what it means to write about it😓. All in all, it's a mess, and there are so many holes left unfilled. It's like running away in a hurry😓

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. It's so embarrassing, and it's even more embarrassing if you ask for them all. If you suddenly kiss or force a hug or something out of nowhere, it's still a different girl.

It's pretty good, but it's a little stained. The plot is very good and the story is a bit too detailed, so there's a bit of staining.

When writing a harem story, you should mark it directly. If you don't mark it and set up an archway in front of it, you would be so pure. At the end, there is a line about asking for multiple female protagonists. It's really disgusting.

To be honest, it would be great if this was the original work (if you call me, I'll run away first, you scold me, you're right), it would be nice if the ending was extended a little bit, the ending with a knife is a bit uncomfortable, and it makes me laugh.

Afraid of cloth 🐔 Awesome