The Carefree Fourth Young Master

It's very well written, the plot is perfect, and it's also very deep when it's funny.

Guozi, I am also an old fan of yours. I have read all your novels. I hope you won't finish this new novel and don't write too many female protagonists, because it is too cliche and boring. Come up with something new. I hope you can break through the bottleneck and bring better works to everyone.

The biggest and biggest failure point is that guns and ammunition were developed in dozens of chapters. It is as easy as knocking down. Did you know that guns contain multiple metals? Steel, nickel, chromium and aluminum are highly processed and heated to achieve the initial appearance. There are also bullets. Oh, I really don't want to say it. It's a waste. Time, wasted energy.

Don't tell when you see something, don't know when you ask. Don't worry about your own business, and come home early if you have nothing to do.

Well written, please update more

The author really underestimated the IQ and emotional intelligence of a special forces commander. Many authors write about ancient time travel I always don't understand why the feudal dynasty hierarchy was established and what its purpose was. During the Ming Dynasty, the Jinyiwei were simply the emperor's personal soldiers. This kind of person does not need to have political achievements in the officialdom. There is only one thing to do, which is to be the emperor's hand honestly. Do not have too many ideas of your own when performing the Emperor's tasks Do one's own thing, kill first and then tell the story, act emotionally. If any emperor encounters such a person, he will not reuse it. What's more, it is simply unbelievable to kill the local prince first and then kill his colleagues at will! Of course you can let yourself go and fantasize when writing a novel, but the author should also hold on to the kite string in his hand! A story without logic, no matter how fanciful it is, is still stupid! !

This beauty has nothing to do with the book, it is simply because the author is beautiful.

Jiang Zhiwen. The whole thing makes no sense. It is estimated to be generated by AI. I read it just to leave a negative review so that others wouldn't be disgusted. This rating is just a brush up, right?

It sets the identity of a modern soldier who travels through time. But the protagonist does not have the will of a soldier, the behavior of a soldier, the insights of a soldier, the way of thinking, the knowledge of a soldier, the habits of a soldier, the strength of a soldier, and the basic ability of a soldier to obey orders. The author sets the military status as the biggest poisonous point. As long as the military setting remains, then every word the author says is a lie. The whole article is a lie, not a single word of truth.

The subject matter and characters are good, but the protagonist kills people without considering the consequences, which is really a bit intellectually depressing. For the feudal dynasty to which he belonged, he could not survive more than a hundred chapters. Also, he was an army commander before time travel. With his behavior, he could only be wiped out.