The Tycoon’s Warlord

The ending was too sloppy, with a lot of foreshadowing left unmentioned. The princess met the Queen Mother and there was no follow-up? Where is Miss Wang who was kidnapped? He didn't say whether he could be saved or not? I gave it to the blacksmith village chief Rikimaru but he didn't see them looking for a partner. What about Yang Lin who was taken in later? Tools should be thrown away after use, right? The sales of copper and iron mines have not yet opened up. After eating beggar's chicken, there is no follow-up plan to open a restaurant and enter the catering industry. And will the eldest lady's albinism be cured automatically? What about her Kev setting? Also, Lin Xuan didn't explain what happened later, etc. There are too many settings that are thrown away after use. It's like watching JOJO. I hope the author can be more rigorous. What's the difference between just digging a hole without knowing how to fill it, and just pooping without knowing how to wipe your butt? Also, many of the settings in the book are flawed. The jasmine perfume is extracted from skatole. I don't know, but I thought it was a fantasy novel.

After reading it, it was okay. I have longed for the beautiful life in the countryside. However, as the negative review said, there are too many places that swallow up the setting. In the end, it is still too short. I hope the plot can be extended a little longer, and maybe these pitfalls can be filled.

I found this book by chance in an advertisement. The setting at the beginning was interesting, so I read it. After two days of catching up with Tomato, I read the latest chapters. There are some words that I really can't say: Sun Xuemeng has always had a lot of roles since her appearance. On the other hand, Wang Siyi who comes with her is so transparent that she seems to have disappeared in many chapters, and is not even as impressive as her father Wang Chuanzhong. Sun Xuemeng and the Sun family are really not economical. After contacting the protagonist, they have been working hard to benefit their own family. The main reason why the protagonist is reluctant to accept her is because of this. The purpose of the Sun family is too strong and too obvious, which later caused such a big scandal. If we put aside the purpose of the Sun family for a moment, Sun Xuemeng's character of the unruly and willful young lady is quite lovable. She is in perfect contrast to Wang Siyi. The process of pursuing the protagonist is also very interesting. Recalling the sweetness in the early stage of their acquaintance, her ending is really heart-wrenching. One comment put it very well. When Sun Xuemeng first appeared, many readers hated her, but as the plot progressed, many people slowly accepted her like the protagonist. Although she still always thinks about benefiting her family, she can definitely reach the finale smoothly as long as she does not do anything too outrageous. Unfortunately, the Sun family later crossed the line, and Sun Xuemeng was definitely destined to die, but at this time, as readers, they felt a little sympathy for her. I don't know if the author has laid too much foreshadowing for Sun Xuemeng and the Sun family to "make trouble" in the previous article. I think it would be abnormal if it didn't develop like this. I specifically searched for the completed version before the deletion and compared it. Sun Xuemeng has hardly appeared since he settled in Baicao Hall in Taoyuan Town. The ending of Chapter 507 did not reappear in the happy ending. The ending of Chapter 507 of the original text resulted in many plots not being explained clearly in the later period. The plot was advanced too hastily, and Sun Xuemeng was just one of them. Some people also mentioned this in the comments. It is no wonder that the author decided to delete and rewrite✍🏻. Comparing the two daughters Sun and Wang, Wang Siyi's role is obviously too small. Judging from the fact that they both like the protagonist and have different personalities, they should develop two different emotional lines with the protagonist. And according to the current plot development, it is normal for the protagonist to choose the more reliable Wang family. The Wang family father and daughter must be more helpful to the protagonist's career than the Sun family uncles and nephews. Finally, let's talk about Sun Xuemeng personally. Do you think she loves the protagonist? I think she definitely does. Although she initially approached the protagonist with a strong utilitarian purpose, it is not difficult to see that the two gradually accumulated feelings during the development of the plot, but it has not exceeded Sun Xuemeng's love for his mother's family, so it is understandable that their uncle and nephew betrayed her later.

The story is exciting, the plot is compact and powerful, and the writing is lifelike, "The rolling Yangtze River flows eastward, and the waves wash away the heroes... Right and wrong, success and failure are all gone, but the country is still there, and the sunset is red several times." There are thousands of human natures, and in the end, a true hero is rarely confused in his life.

Has the author graduated from elementary school? He is really convinced by making a semi-automatic pistol out of a bamboo tube. Why not just let the protagonist hold a nuclear bomb in his hand and give this unseen world a happy life?

The author probably has a low level of education, and the article is mindless and cool. It was okay at the beginning, but the more I read, the more I couldn't stand it. The plot is full of loopholes, the preface does not match the subtitles, and the characters are a mess. Barbarian girls are brave and good at fighting, but they act coquettishly and behave like little girls at every turn. The eldest lady of an ancient medical family fell in love with the male protagonist and said that she had a relationship with him and became pregnant. The second wife, a well-established think tank, said as soon as she opened her mouth: My husband, are you really having sex with her? As soon as the man's leg was broken unplanned, the twisted man came in in a wheelchair. The emotional wheelchair was prepared in advance. All the votes are full of typos. I seriously suspect that the author converted speech into text to write the novel. What a great subject matter, alas.

It's really terrible. This is not how Shuangwen was compiled. The reason why this book is good is because the author has no common sense at all? I felt it was too ridiculous after reading Chapter 5, so I endured and continued reading. The more I read, the more I felt that the author thought the readers were stupid.

The author has a complete world view, detailed description of character relationships, novel logic, emotional intelligence, wisdom and authenticity! Wonderful!

The characterization is so poor. Especially in the emotional scenes, he is decisive in killing outside, brave and resourceful, and has a deep grasp of human nature. Is it really reasonable to come back like a virgin and can't even control my own woman? Or is it all based on conjecture. He even got caught in the act of being naughty by a woman he didn't have much to do with. I'm afraid this author is not good at it.

Rubbish. You can't stand it without thinking. . After watching so many time travels, this is the only one I can't bear to give up on.