The Royal Family Abandoned Their Son and Established the Supreme Immortal Dynasty at the Beginning

Not bad, not bad. It's interesting. But there are too few chapters. Please update it quickly. It's not enjoyable enough. Come on, author.

The realm goes up and down from time to time! ! Yanyun Eighteen Rides Everyday

I have already given a negative review, but at this time, the author does not know yet

The description of war is well done. The protagonist never forgets his mother, which is filial piety. The hole for the woman in front was also filled. Very good! !

Except for the update being a bit slow, everything else is fine.

I would like to give some advice to the author. Please write an outline or some details before writing a book. You write too casually. You have forgotten what summoned this and that. You have lost several military units and characters. The realm is also messy. You are always short of something. What are you doing? Did you use your brain to write a book or did you not record it?

For the sake of plot development, a fifth prince was forcibly added. There was no description at all before, and it was just written about deep feelings. In order to advance the plot, revenge was forced. A team of tens of thousands defeated a team of 1 million, and they still won. You can say that it is not outrageous.

I'm really convinced. His soldiers will not die in a fight, only others will die. His soldiers always maintain the same number as they come, which is also awesome.

It's just like playing a city defense battle in an online game. It keeps going back and forth in the loop. It's boring to watch, so I gave up.

It's all fights and fights all the time and my brain doesn't work very well.