I Became Cannon Fodder in a Female Channel's Novel About Cultivating Immortals

Talking about my personal feelings, it seems that this is the true cultivation of immortality. It will not forcibly surrender wisdom, nor will it be unable to walk like a stallion when it sees a woman. It is purely dedicated to the path of immortality. Of course, the later ending is a bit hasty, but to me this novel is still very enjoyable.

It's very average, ordinary, it's a female channel, but it's not a female channel. After reading Chapter 67, I was confused. The plot is very bland and boring. I don't know when I started to feel good or something. It's obviously a continuous reading without pausing, but this novel gave me an indescribable confusion. The plot is really confusing, and it's too slow to push. Sometimes it's passed by in one stroke, and I don't want to use poison to talk about things.

Well enough. Not so many tricks

She cast a wide net at the beginning, but was sucked by a vacuum cleaner and turned into a virtual one. She described her appearance in the beginning to resemble the heroine, and later became the daughter of luck. Why did Du let a man who had never been in the scene fall in love with him? She had no idea what he wanted to do.

The writing of this book can only be said to be average, the writing style is not bad, but the plot is really average. The protagonist's early hook is very easy to use, but why has it never appeared again after writing eight or ninety chapters? The description of this hook is quite fierce, but the plot is not pleasant to watch. It does not have the feeling that this kind of novel should have. I have read more than a hundred chapters, but I can't find it interesting. The plot is too bland. The description of the fighting plot can only be described as average. There is no passion at all. It is weak in the early stage and cannot beat others. After the strength is slightly improved, the fighting plot becomes a direct hit. Without skills, it is all about strength. The timeline is also stretched too long. It could be a year later, a few years later, half a century later. The timeline is so long, but the hang-up disappears immediately. After such a long time, according to the random attribute +1 every day, the strength should have improved a lot, so just forget about the hang-up. Especially when there are more than 100 chapters, I can't find the desire to read it at all. I can only say that this novel can be read. It can be regarded as a ration novel during the book shortage period. Those who like dull plots can experience it.

2.1 Points. I don't want to read it. It's so honest.

One person really ruined the whole book's goodwill. He has been following a certain little girl since he found her. It was fine in the early stage, but after three hundred chapters, he was directly led by the nose. He is equipped with the secret technique of Qing Fu, which means that any of his secrets cannot be hidden from the little kid. He is also constantly being coerced into repaying favors. Although he does not pose any threat to the protagonist, it looks too disgusting. The name of the secret technique is getting more and more outrageous without mentioning it. The name of the new secret technique I have seen so far is so disgusting that I have to say, the name of the secret technique is (Mom Qingfu, let me give you a thumbs up). If you don't want to write the protagonist, you don't have to write it. Just kill the protagonist and write Qingfu. Don't be disgusting. I will give you a zero based on this. I want the protagonist to be invincible in the world, but I use your secret technique to become invincible in the world. How can I still call it invincible? The protagonist doesn't even have doubts, and just changes it lazily. Is it really that difficult for you to become a god and have a +1 talent to create secret techniques? All your talents have been fed to dogs, right?

There are so many words written about the new Destiny's Daughter, and she helped so much and was obtained by a random man. If you don't want to write so many plots about her, don't help her all the time, it's disgusting. It's poisonous, it spreads far and wide and won't be picked up, it's just disgusting.

The protagonist Renshe is an honest person. Therefore, good people who are bullied by others are always being targeted. Although, those who bully the protagonist are punished in various ways. However, no matter what their status is, they will find trouble with the protagonist for various profit reasons. There are too many novels that use quarrels with the protagonists to drive the plot, and I get tired of them and feel unhappy. So my personal feeling is average.

The original heroine had a real sword, and she used all these hooks, and a big pussy fight directly flew into the air (￣д￣;)