Martial Movement: Starting with a Sign-In at the Old Man's Ring

It is recommended for book friends who have not read the original work to read it.

Didn't the author see the woman? Send a woman at the beginning.

The protagonist has no brains at all and doesn't keep any trump cards. Breaking through is like drinking water. He kills people without being silenced. Just like this, when he comes out of the novice village and encounters a powerful enemy, he is investigated by someone. Breaking through and upgrading are not normal. Upgrading rushes up, and the boss directly seizes slices for research, searching for souls, etc. Yao Lao is not invincible.

Good

Talent, he transformed Lin Dong's cultivation in the original work into the protagonist, weakened Lin Dong, and then emphasized the hero's cross-level fighting. It's disgusting.

The writing is relatively poor, and the characterization is terrible. The characters don't have any souls, they are just puppets that you fall in love with when you meet the protagonist. The author did not write carefully, and did not consider the character of the character, the background of the task, the age of the character, and the events. People are human because they have souls and can think. Different women will tend to have certain characteristics. Ordinary women like to focus on excellence, small families focus on status, big families focus on interests, aristocratic families focus on talents, sects focus on rights, and auctions focus on freedom. The protagonist is based on strength and talent, so according to the character design, few women in the article will have a good impression of him. In addition, the protagonist is hypocritical, lecherous, has scumbag traits, etc., And it is impossible for girls who meet the conditions to follow him. The author's writing is too outrageous and he didn't write it carefully at all

It's quite interesting when it's all finished, but it ends too quickly, the pace is slow, and the writing is very detailed, but it disappeared halfway through. After reading seventy or eighty chapters, I didn't have the heart to continue reading.

An elixir refined from medicinal materials worth ten Yang Yuan Dan can be sold for a thousand Yang Yuan Dan, but an elixir refined from medicinal materials worth a thousand Yang Yuan Dan can only be sold for six thousand Yang Yuan. Have you got a brain?

The front is good, the back is bad,

It's so bad. The plot went too fast after the Hundred Dynasties War, and it directly broke through to a big level.