Konoha: This Uchiha is Not Quite Right

It's too watery. Who of the people who watch Naruto watch it because of the war and fighting? Putting all this aside, the plot is pitiful.

As for the description of the final battle, just skip it. Who is disgusting if you write a book like this?

Maybe I've read too many Naruto fanfics recently, and the plots are all very similar, especially when I wrote about Dragon Vein, Kishida's psychic beast, and Hashirama Cells. I feel like Naruto fanfics are already very saturated, and there's not much to write about if I want to innovate.

This book is missing two of the most important flavors of Naruto. One is Naruto's rich plot, and the other is Naruto's passion.

It's very good. It's not as rigid as following the original work. The plot is novel and has its own unique understanding.