Martial Movement: Starting with a Sign-In at the Old Man's Ring
人在武动，开局签到药老戒指
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 851k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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The timeline is wrong, the Dou Po plot comes first, and at the beginning of Wu Dong, Xiao Yan has become the emperor and stayed in Dou Qi Continent for decades before leaving.
I'm actually curious as to why there are so many more fans writing about Dou Po than about Wu Dong. Logically speaking, Wudong's protagonist is better portrayed (more decisive in killing and more perfect in character). To be honest, Wudong's storyline is more fleshed-out, the background is more cruel, and the entire novel is more artistic. It's just that there is a bit of a gap in shaping women.
Ling Qingzhu, Ying Huanhuan, green sandalwood. These girls should want it
The writing is okay. I feel that Lin Dong should be better than Xiao Yan. After all, Lin Dong has refined the plane Yuan Fei.
The author should not listen to those people who say they want a single female protagonist. You show readers that they want a single female protagonist. So can you satisfy both those who like Qingtan and those who like Aya Qingzhu? If you do one thing, the other will definitely not be satisfied. At this time, don't you have a harem to generate electricity for love? So what else are you listing?
I have a suggestion. After the protagonist leaves Novice Village, he should stop hanging out with Lin Dong. Otherwise, he will end up copying the original work, which is boring. To give a simple analogy, my cousin and I play online games together. We practice leveling separately, and we only work together when playing BOOS. 😎
Does the author understand? Does Qingtan still have the Tianyuan realm? Is it okay for others to just form Yin Dan?
Is there no such thing as Xiao Yan traveling through time in the author's setting? There is no Xiao Yan in the Dou Qi Continent. According to the timeline, the Dou Qi Continent is now dominated by the Soul Clan. 🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫 Then the protagonist has to help Yao Lao avenge, and then the drama of Yanzu fighting Soul Emperor will be staged. 🤭
All kinds of power came together, and the treasures of heaven and earth were also concentrated. According to my opinion, the power system of this book must have collapsed, either by forcibly suppressing the protagonist's strength, or by speeding through the world of martial arts and entering the Great Thousand. The plot of the original book transitions too quickly, and reading the book is like reading the title. I gave up the book
According to the timeline of the original work, when Lin Dong first appeared in Qingyang Town, Xiao Yan was already the Dou Emperor.