In the Ordinary World, I Am Sun Shaoping

It seemed okay at first, but as it went on, it became more and more troublesome. A bezoar detoxification pill made you think it was a panacea and could do anything. You went to a black market and caught someone selling a watch. You went to school in the capital. I gave you US dollars and you actually thought of exchanging them for RMB. The more you went on, the more you couldn't stand it!

In the adaptation of the original work, Shaoping and Xiaoxia took the final step and came together, and Xiulian was also alive and well, which indeed made up for the regrets of the original work. Being able to adapt the ordinary world is worthy of encouragement. As a time travel novel, the accumulation of wealth is relatively careless. There are too many explanatory texts and the look and feel is poor. The love between Shaoping and Xiaoxia has lost the romance of the original work, the reunion at Huangyuan Cinema, and the separation in the back mountain. The writing style of the original work is much better, and the romantic atmosphere created by this novel is hard to match. The adaptation of Run Ye's plot is not reasonable enough. In the original work, Run Ye married Li Xiangqian at the request of his elders as a compromise with his fate. In the revised version, Run Ye never married because of Uncle Fu Jun's promotion, but there was no change in Secretary Fu Tang's attitude. If Shaoping accepted the love between Jin Xiu and Xiaoxia at the same time, it would have been weird at the time. After the image of Lan Xiang in the original work was changed, she looked very thin. The image of Jin Bo was originally very three-dimensional. After the adaptation, the original Western part was given to Runsheng, and the Huangyuan and military camp parts were also deleted. It would be a bit empty if Shaoping's close friend disappeared like this. Overall, this novel is good and makes up for the shortcomings of the ordinary worldview in the original work.

I don't understand why you wore it. Favors were spent on Sun Manyin.

The writing was timid, and the work was done lavishly and without regard to the consequences. In that era, would you dare to use the money you got from gambling? If you just give tens of thousands to your family, there will be problems with the source of the assets.

I feel that except for the beginning of "The Ordinary World", the rest is the author's own thoughts. It is not as fascinating as Lu Yao's writing. The work is not ups and downs, and the emotional expression is not strong.

What is the purpose of writing a novel? What you write is not as good as the TV series. Why do you write it? It is ugly and long, a love story, a successful career, nothing.

It's so ugly, the storyline has been changed, and it's still a TV series.

It was okay after reading dozens of chapters, but then it changed. It felt like I was not living in 1975. Who raised chickens at that time and raised more than 10 chickens at a time without fear of death?

It was a mess, starting with the last few pictures saying he was going to teach his brother-in-law a lesson. In the blink of an eye, the second picture talks about catching wild boars and raising wild boars, which is totally wrong.

The front part is okay, but the back part is very messy.