Touching Treasures Makes You Stronger, So Why Are You Touching Women?

Didn't the author plan to write a follow-up to the fairy world from the beginning? Then you shouldn't lay the groundwork in the early stage. I've already thought about the follow-up. But you told me that it ended in a hurry on the earth. Even if you didn't talk about the fairy world, you had to write the whole story on the earth. At least the protagonist married the heroine and told the second team about the existence of inner alchemy and inner bones. You ended it with just two sentences. Then you should not write a novel. It's not suitable for you.

The protagonist is too stupid

I visually inspect the author's lack of education and age, so I'd better read more and see if the novel has better reviews and optimize the plot and character descriptions. The novel is not that delicious.

Many parts are lazy. The ending directly jumps to thousands of years and gives birth to a child. The protagonist has never had an opponent. Even if the girl who bullied him at school can be the boss behind the scenes or always the enemy. If you don't want to, you don't need to use this woman as a foreshadowing. I also thought that this woman is very strong. She has always talked about spiritual bones but I have never seen them. And in the end, I didn't explain the existence of the inner elixir to them. Even if you write the ending well, just jump to thousands of years.

The content description is too bland, a lot of it is just to make up for the word count.

It's so childishly written, both the tasks and the plot are like this

There are problems with the plot, character setting, logic, etc. Of this book. It made me feel so uncomfortable that I wanted to vomit.

The writing is not good, the plot is boring, and it disappears inexplicably.