When the World Becomes a Game Map

The previous plot is good and can be said to be relatively exciting. However, the plot speeds up significantly later on. The heroine's character can be said to be too kind but not a virgin in the early stage. At the end, it is a bit disgusting to agree to be followed by her incompetent parents. The ending was too hasty, and the part where the male and female protagonists reunited felt unnecessary. Personally, I felt that it would have been better if they didn't reunite or had another outcome.

To be honest, after more than ten years of reading novels, this is the second time a novel has left me so speechless! , After reading the introduction, I thought it was a story about a strong woman who fights monsters and upgrades! I have read Chapter 45 so far, and there are so many flaws that I have been holding back my anger. ①The heroine herself was one of the first 10,000 people to enter the first level, but in the end, she was still outside the 1,000,000th place. Why do you still have to get together with him when you know that the person opposite you is a low-level guy that you don't like? It's not impossible to form a team with a few other girls! ② You keep saying you are thinking about your parents, why don't you work hard to become stronger and go find your parents? You've been wasting your time there! ③000, Even though it said it was an auxiliary, you didn't use it to learn more about the situation, and you kept quarreling with him! I really don't know how to set up the heroine's character! ④The domineering boss's fiancée was really killed by the heroine! I can't recognize people clearly! Even though 000 said she was not a good person, he still had to take her with him! Bring disaster to Boss Ba and his party! ⑤Chapter 45, the ultimate big boss was basically solved by the man in black. Even though he had already received a large amount of experience and invisible rewards, he still grabbed the best rewards. There was no principle. After all, he was a doomsday who respected strength, so forget it! The most unacceptable thing is that the man in black is going to kill the heroine to seize the treasure! I went back to the profile and took a look! It turns out the male protagonist's name is the Man in Black! ! ! 🤨🤨🤨The person who wants to kill the heroine is even arranged to give him to the heroine! ! ! How sexy is the heroine... ⑥The character setting of the heroine is too weird... Who are the people being saved? ? ? A man named Jiang Chao, a man named Lili who is scheming and selfish, and the male protagonist as well. He is such a person that he told the heroine to get out of the man who saved him when he was awakening! There are too many flaws~

The front is okay, but the back gives me a headache. The emotional lines are written in a mess, which is quite misogynistic.

Generally speaking, the content of the article is very exciting, the characters have distinct personalities, the content of the copy is also good, and the story is exciting. But the ending is a little rushed and there are no extras.

Bad ending. The plot is very confusing.

Good looking good looking

The heroine Madonna wastes time

The plot is quite confusing, the relationship between men and women is complicated, which makes me feel very annoying, and the relationship between relatives is also very annoying.

It looks okay from the front, but it gets more and more boring as you go to the back, and the ending is a bit ridiculous.

Come on, I hope it gets better and better