When the World Becomes a Game Map

The heroine's performance in the following chapters is different from the first few chapters. If it weren't for the subject matter that I like... I wouldn't be able to persist. The heroine is really not an ordinary person who wants to quit 😂

For now, in my eyes, the advantages of this article outweigh the shortcomings. The highlight should basically be on the female protagonist. The first is very indecisive, the second is a bit like a virgin, the third has no brains, the fourth has no sense of crisis, and the fifth is very lazy. Another highlight is the otaku male partner. I understand that he was arranged to give the heroine a chance to transform, but the logic in that part was very illogical and the plot was unreasonable, so it left me with the impression that the heroine had no sense of crisis and was alone in a room with a drunk man at night. There are still some plot arrangements about him, which generally make people feel frustrated. It would be more reasonable to arrange some emotional outlets. The heroine's attitude towards her assistant is also very childish. It is difficult to understand that this is a twenty-five-year-old adult woman. (Yes, this is my point of view as a twenty-year-old adult woman.) Of course, this book actually has advantages in my opinion. The subject matter is good, and the arrangement is okay, but there are still some problems with the rhythm and depth of description. It's pretty good considering it's the first time the author has written an upgrade stream. There is no excessive female competition in the article so far. Hope it continues. Because it is an upgrade stream, I hope that every competition that occurs can be maintained at a high level. Speaking of competition, I still hope that the heroine will have some awareness of the crisis of the general environment and stop her laziness. In fact, with so many things happening around her, I thought her mentality had undergone a major change. Hopefully this will be reflected in recent episodes. Actually, I'm not sure about the proportion of romance and career in this book. If romance plays a large part, just think of me as nitpicking. From my personal perspective, the level of romance in this article is not small. So far, it is on the edge of my acceptance. I hope the author can live up to the five words of strong female upgrade flow. Added to bookshelf, looking forward to seeing a better heroine and better plot.

… The heroine felt that her character was broken... A person who was so indifferent to the end of the world actually cried after killing a male partner who wanted to rape her?... And she kept blaming the system. Sometimes he is smart and sometimes he has no intelligence, and he doesn't know what kind of plane he is working on. The highlight of this article is probably the setting of the game field…

This is my first attempt to write a novel about the heroine's upgrade. It has a completely different setting than the one about Mermaid. It is a story about an ordinary person slowly growing up. As a Buddhist author, it was almost a month after publishing a book that I remembered that I had never published a book review, and suddenly realized that I was too lazy 😂 So I specially posted a book review to tell you little cuties that I am not aloof at all, I just pay attention to you silently where you can't see it... Finally, thank you for your support😁 (I will definitely work hard to code, haha~)